Like a Puppet

[Sei Akujin]

This is another evil poem.............don't spam and keep suck comments to yourself.

My soul is gone,
I am left to die,
Hell take me away.

My flesh of sin,
My flesh of evil,
My flesh will burn,
My flesh will die.

I am souless,
Like a puppet,
My strings were being pulled by
Satan's will.

Now I have expired,
I shall burn,
Like wood on a fire,
Throw my ashes to the deepest
Pits of hell.

My empty shell,
My body,
Like a puppet.

[MajinYajuu]

probably not your best work but still not to shabby

[Sei Akujin]

I was distracted when I wrote it(not a bad thing though) it could have been better

[kenshin25]

...anything better than what I could've done. That was a pretty good poem. Don't listen to Yajuu, all your works are good. I'd like to hear more...

[BlackShadow]

Once again i comment upon your work. You haven't lost your touch and yet i hope you never will. Your Evil poems are unique and understanding. Well understanding for those who experiance similiar thoughts. Keep making more. It's going to be a big book. Probally not so big if i publish it so soon but i'll continue my search for more talents.