Grasp

[KyoKo]

i made this poem when i got really really mad
so if you dont like it that dont say any thing
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Death is drawing close,
I grasp it in my hands.
The more i hear the closer it gets,
the more i see... the more i Die,
more and more 'cause of you.
Your words are hurtfull,
Thanks to you Death is my Greatest friend,
Thanks to you i live for Death
all 'cause of you.

[KyoKo]

does my poem suck that bad?

[MajinYajuu]

No, I thought it was quite good.

I have a thing for dark poems :twisted:

[KyoKo]

oh thank you ... your so nice
i thought every one hated my poems

[Aura]

I dont hate them this one is quite good sora

[KyoKo]

Thank you AURA ^_~ you so so so nice ^_~
hehe
0_o