Haruko_san
09-23-2004, 01:33 AM
I haven't written a poem in a long time... but here's one of my old ones...
Childish Hopes
I'm going to line my trash can with childish hopes,
Hopes of love, hopes of a happy life,
Hopes of succeeding, hopes of no strife,
I'll live my life at the end of a rope,
The closer end death, at the farther end hope,
And I know I've been deceived,
By my childish hopes, and runaway dreams...
By the way I only accept critisism if it says I'm good... jk :lol:
Childish Hopes
I'm going to line my trash can with childish hopes,
Hopes of love, hopes of a happy life,
Hopes of succeeding, hopes of no strife,
I'll live my life at the end of a rope,
The closer end death, at the farther end hope,
And I know I've been deceived,
By my childish hopes, and runaway dreams...
By the way I only accept critisism if it says I'm good... jk :lol: