Why!

[Aura]

this poem isn't that good and it probably wont make much sense to you but I had to get this out before it destroys me

Why did you go?
Why did you have to die?
You left me alone
I just want to cry
You left so quickly
Yet it seemed so slow
You suffered so much
More than we’ll ever know
You left us with “HIM”
The one I grew to hate
The one that left us behind
What a horrible fate
I haven’t seem “HIM” in years
Yet he runs my life
He says we’re mistakes
Now I see the real purpose of a knife
He wants us to obey him
And go by his rules
Wants us to forget about you
He must think we’re all fools
He says we cant do anything right
That we’re always being bad
Well he’s the one who left us
He doesn’t deserve to be called our “Dad”

Most of you well be lost in the dark but oh well

[Chi14]

OMG.....SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD and u wrote that? wow i feel like crying aura, seriously are u really THAT depressed?

[Aura]

Life can be depressing...especially with That Man

[MajinYajuu]

I have found that being able to get even some of the stuff I have rolling around in my head out & onto somewhere like here, even if people have no idea as to why I have writen it, a lifesaver.


A good poem as well

[Hiryuu Megami23]

Damn good....That's all I can say.

[Chi14]

I KNOW ISNT IT? i'm envious! grrr...no for real ur really good at poems and sad ones at that! jouchan too..

[Aura]

Oh yes I forget sometimes that your Shorties friend Oh well Thank you I dont think that its that good but it was just bugging me so I wrote a poem.

[Mors]

that's wut everyone should do. when they get depressed/sad/angry/happy they should write/draw wut they're feeling. it's a way to get out whatever is bottled up inside. i do that all the time. i actually understand some of the poem but never could i understand all since i have never been in ur posision and i'm not the one who wrote the poem. it's a very good poem and i bet a lot of people can relate one way or another.

[spike]

very good peom.