achilles
09-22-2004, 01:59 PM
I wrote this and gave it to my gf... Its very very very long but entertaining.
I tried not to make it to soppy...
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I wrote a poem for someone who’s tribute was due
A poem that made them feel special all through
A poem of words that spoke only the truth
So I send this with choice as a poem for you…
I send you a rhyme that is lame from the start
So lame it may be it was sent from my heart
So listen with care as you hear what I say
As I say it with promise that I mean it each day
*****
The moment I met you was a moment of awe
Of wonder, amazement but else I’m unsure
My mood was abundant of my conspicuous ways
As I drank more than my many my thoughts yelled out praise
I spoke of your appearance as if you weren’t there
Your appeal and pyjamas and your model like hair
Your arse and your body I wished you to share
The sheer touch of your skin was all that I cared
I sleazed and I sauntered for you all that night
So shamed I am now but back then seemed alright
So I tripped over and stumbled according to plan
Apologised and slowly crawled off you to stand
But the more you rejected the more that I tried
I respect all the girls who care more for their pride
As this was a fact all I could do was let go
And leave a little memory of me and my show
*****
So soon I did see you and you looked back in my eye
The tension apparent but you still had a guy
So knowing this, my charm, was not to be cared
But still I drank to extent where my mood tempt to dare
I lacked any seduction nor flinched even moves
I talked you with words to comfort your blues
You failed the driver’s test you thought you would whip
So I looked in your eye and offered a chip
Then a moment we sat with no one but us
And I wondered why you bothered after attempts of sheer lust
Then I remembered when you watched when I ran in the nude
And I thought to myself… “She saw talent dude”
But beside all the filth that was rich in my mind
I thought that this moment was only good for one time
I doubted my chances and I valued pride too
So I hindered the kiss I wished to give you
*****
As that present became past I moved on from that night
A girl that is taken is a girl out of sight
I wished you were single but you were not at all
So I played like a man and aimed for clear goals
*****
In a state of unawareness after one month or some twos
A tap on the shoulder awoke me of good news
That cute girl I met had no further restrictions
And had me in her life in future predictions J
Without hesitation I compiled numbers of eight figures
Consisting of 8, 2, 4, 8, 4, 9, 9, and 2 to inflate chances bigger
I called and it rang and I waited alone
To be informed by dear Jude that you were not at home
*****
At last did I see you for a movie and drink
And as we sipped on our Boost Juice quite deep I did think
From embarrassment to the Matrix… how did I get here
With a beauty so striking and a kiss felt so near
But I stalled with repent as I waited for time
For a moment that was proper… a moment of prime
Where we’d meet and we’d talk and smooth words I would say
Then take you in my arms and then whisk you away
*****
So we met and we talked but lacked smooth charming ways
And after minutes of meeting I whisked you away
We walked a fair distance with thoughts of sheer bliss
But made sure when I looked at you and asked for a kiss
You responded with approval and gradually neared
Yet I felt like a goob as you looked at me weird
But from the question I asked I understood why
Your expectations were obvious of me as a guy
So we kissed with much passion with tension no more
Our first kiss was secure as if I kissed you before
With my hands on your body and your lips upon mine
That moment of enchantment stilled a moment in time
*****
The enchantment continues as we continue to grow
As we continue to make out in public places I’m certain you know
I love you with truth and I love you a great deal
So great it is unlimited and a love that is real
I tried not to make it to soppy...
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
I wrote a poem for someone who’s tribute was due
A poem that made them feel special all through
A poem of words that spoke only the truth
So I send this with choice as a poem for you…
I send you a rhyme that is lame from the start
So lame it may be it was sent from my heart
So listen with care as you hear what I say
As I say it with promise that I mean it each day
*****
The moment I met you was a moment of awe
Of wonder, amazement but else I’m unsure
My mood was abundant of my conspicuous ways
As I drank more than my many my thoughts yelled out praise
I spoke of your appearance as if you weren’t there
Your appeal and pyjamas and your model like hair
Your arse and your body I wished you to share
The sheer touch of your skin was all that I cared
I sleazed and I sauntered for you all that night
So shamed I am now but back then seemed alright
So I tripped over and stumbled according to plan
Apologised and slowly crawled off you to stand
But the more you rejected the more that I tried
I respect all the girls who care more for their pride
As this was a fact all I could do was let go
And leave a little memory of me and my show
*****
So soon I did see you and you looked back in my eye
The tension apparent but you still had a guy
So knowing this, my charm, was not to be cared
But still I drank to extent where my mood tempt to dare
I lacked any seduction nor flinched even moves
I talked you with words to comfort your blues
You failed the driver’s test you thought you would whip
So I looked in your eye and offered a chip
Then a moment we sat with no one but us
And I wondered why you bothered after attempts of sheer lust
Then I remembered when you watched when I ran in the nude
And I thought to myself… “She saw talent dude”
But beside all the filth that was rich in my mind
I thought that this moment was only good for one time
I doubted my chances and I valued pride too
So I hindered the kiss I wished to give you
*****
As that present became past I moved on from that night
A girl that is taken is a girl out of sight
I wished you were single but you were not at all
So I played like a man and aimed for clear goals
*****
In a state of unawareness after one month or some twos
A tap on the shoulder awoke me of good news
That cute girl I met had no further restrictions
And had me in her life in future predictions J
Without hesitation I compiled numbers of eight figures
Consisting of 8, 2, 4, 8, 4, 9, 9, and 2 to inflate chances bigger
I called and it rang and I waited alone
To be informed by dear Jude that you were not at home
*****
At last did I see you for a movie and drink
And as we sipped on our Boost Juice quite deep I did think
From embarrassment to the Matrix… how did I get here
With a beauty so striking and a kiss felt so near
But I stalled with repent as I waited for time
For a moment that was proper… a moment of prime
Where we’d meet and we’d talk and smooth words I would say
Then take you in my arms and then whisk you away
*****
So we met and we talked but lacked smooth charming ways
And after minutes of meeting I whisked you away
We walked a fair distance with thoughts of sheer bliss
But made sure when I looked at you and asked for a kiss
You responded with approval and gradually neared
Yet I felt like a goob as you looked at me weird
But from the question I asked I understood why
Your expectations were obvious of me as a guy
So we kissed with much passion with tension no more
Our first kiss was secure as if I kissed you before
With my hands on your body and your lips upon mine
That moment of enchantment stilled a moment in time
*****
The enchantment continues as we continue to grow
As we continue to make out in public places I’m certain you know
I love you with truth and I love you a great deal
So great it is unlimited and a love that is real