this random freehand guy...

[jeff]

This isn't anything to praise...It took me a while to draw something that would take the average guy 30 minutes (again :swe2:)
http://onfinite.com/libraries/237914/c78.jpg
sorry i couldn't get it to view anybigger...but there you go!
Decided to call him shinji rei murasakai...

I liked it...I liked drawing it. I need some un-biased criticism for my next freehand anime style guy! please?

lol! in se's opinion...this is a picture of harry potter high on illegal substances! lol...It made me laugh so hard! owie!

[Erk Mizuhara]

okay, promise not to get offened by what i'm about to put...

it's an okay drawing. Maybe a bit more (how can i put this...?) emphasis on the lines. I don't agree with the eyes. You may have overdone it a bit there. The arms and hands seem a bit small, as does the staff. Apart from that, it's a fairly good picture. (try using blank paper - lol)

[jeff]

yea, I know...I just used the first piece of paper I could get my hands on! I agree, the arms and staff are too small...but I couldn't be bothered correcting them! lol...don't worry, I need critisism, so I can handle it ^^
I know I'm not the best artist in the world...we can all improve ^^
thaks erk...I'll be a drawing the next guy on blank paper!

[Erk Mizuhara]

anytime bud. I'm the unofficial ACF art and poetry critic! lol.

[jeff]

yea? I've got alot of homework to do tonight...but I feel like drawing again...It's a cruel world! I'll keep everyone up to date with my slow progress! Drawing freehand is way more creative than copying form somewhere...I'll keep it up! I may even improve! watch this space...lol