Malikyte Dark
12-15-2004, 10:40 AM
I've been writing this story for a couple years now but i want your opinion of it so far. :) Please tell me i won't bite anyones head off.Anyway here it is.
Prologue
Hi,my name is Bakura Greenleaf.I'm half elf and half demon,a mutt as some would say but who gives a **** anyway.
In my world,I look like a human with pointy ears,long nails(or claws as I prefer to call them),and long,sharp fangs.When I am living in the human world I look like a normal fourteenyear old girl with long nails and abnormaly sharp canines.
I am going to tell you my confusing life.
It all began before I was born and when my father became king.Koryndil Greenleaf,my father,would not stop useing women of any race.He got ingaged with an elf long enough for her to have Legolas,my eldest brother,then he ordered her to be made a slave and work in the kitchen with the cooks.
Then he met a bard on one of his strolls in the human world and she had Kenshin.He killed her.
He met my mother next,Sandora Hamera,a full blood demon.He found out a little time after dating her that he had fallen in love.She had me.He treseasured he for years.She had my little sister,Dawn and my Little brother,Sora,a few years later.All three of us were born very gifted with magic.My father began to grow tired of all the rumors that were sprending about him and my mother so he sent my mother to live in a house in the Forest of Demons,southeast of Elfhame(my fathers kingdom) when I was around five.Little did I know she already had a son,my brother Inuyasha.I became lonely even with Legolas and Kenshin trying to cheer me up because I missed having a sister to play with.So my father went out and adopted my older sister,Raven.We are very close.
I found out a few weeks later,through my older brothers,that Perner,my uncle,and my two cousins,Riaa and Gadle,had killed my mother and sent Dawn,Sora,and Inuyasha on the run.I was furious.
When I brought it up to my father he told me,it was none of my business what my uncle and cousins did as long as I stayed out of their way.I'd had it,I cussed him out in every language I knew.He told me he did not want me to learn how to use my demon form.It was too late I already found out how to use it but I tell him.I waited,waited until I was old enough,by my standards,to leave and find my two brothers and my sister whom I had not seen for seven years.
It took me a year but I found them.Dawn was schooling in the same human school I was and Sora and Inuyasha stayed home and trained in our mothers home.My life changed a lot after I found them.I made sure the boys were safe while Dawn and I were at school and I always kept an eye on her.
I met my dearest friends at that school. Caldoran, Arianrhod, Axl, Tanoe, Sonic, Lavercam, Lulu,Yuna,and Mariakio.They all had been in my world before and were acostumed to people like Dawn and me.
That's all for today hope you liked it. :D [/quote]
Prologue
Hi,my name is Bakura Greenleaf.I'm half elf and half demon,a mutt as some would say but who gives a **** anyway.
In my world,I look like a human with pointy ears,long nails(or claws as I prefer to call them),and long,sharp fangs.When I am living in the human world I look like a normal fourteenyear old girl with long nails and abnormaly sharp canines.
I am going to tell you my confusing life.
It all began before I was born and when my father became king.Koryndil Greenleaf,my father,would not stop useing women of any race.He got ingaged with an elf long enough for her to have Legolas,my eldest brother,then he ordered her to be made a slave and work in the kitchen with the cooks.
Then he met a bard on one of his strolls in the human world and she had Kenshin.He killed her.
He met my mother next,Sandora Hamera,a full blood demon.He found out a little time after dating her that he had fallen in love.She had me.He treseasured he for years.She had my little sister,Dawn and my Little brother,Sora,a few years later.All three of us were born very gifted with magic.My father began to grow tired of all the rumors that were sprending about him and my mother so he sent my mother to live in a house in the Forest of Demons,southeast of Elfhame(my fathers kingdom) when I was around five.Little did I know she already had a son,my brother Inuyasha.I became lonely even with Legolas and Kenshin trying to cheer me up because I missed having a sister to play with.So my father went out and adopted my older sister,Raven.We are very close.
I found out a few weeks later,through my older brothers,that Perner,my uncle,and my two cousins,Riaa and Gadle,had killed my mother and sent Dawn,Sora,and Inuyasha on the run.I was furious.
When I brought it up to my father he told me,it was none of my business what my uncle and cousins did as long as I stayed out of their way.I'd had it,I cussed him out in every language I knew.He told me he did not want me to learn how to use my demon form.It was too late I already found out how to use it but I tell him.I waited,waited until I was old enough,by my standards,to leave and find my two brothers and my sister whom I had not seen for seven years.
It took me a year but I found them.Dawn was schooling in the same human school I was and Sora and Inuyasha stayed home and trained in our mothers home.My life changed a lot after I found them.I made sure the boys were safe while Dawn and I were at school and I always kept an eye on her.
I met my dearest friends at that school. Caldoran, Arianrhod, Axl, Tanoe, Sonic, Lavercam, Lulu,Yuna,and Mariakio.They all had been in my world before and were acostumed to people like Dawn and me.
That's all for today hope you liked it. :D [/quote]