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Erk Mizuhara
12-10-2004, 01:13 PM
I didn't know it would hurt that bad
Both for you and for me
What i did, i dare not say,
but the consequences won't go away

Maybe you've forgiven me
or mayube you have not.
I know i can forgive you.
But can i forgive myself?

Oh yes, i forgive you, of course.
You said things you didn't mean,
and that was if you spoke at all.
I see it from your side. I understand.

But what i did to you?
There are no excuses, no forgiveness.
I hate myself for it.
and no doubt you hate me, too.

I sink into silence and black.
I can't face you any more.
Loneliness, no more each other.
It hurts, doesn't it?

bloodlover
12-10-2004, 08:04 PM
wow thats a good pome very sad and depreassen

Kawaii Shuichi
12-10-2004, 08:22 PM
I like it lil brother. It expresses yourself in a very beautiful way, even though it is hard.

*Hugs*

Watari
12-13-2004, 12:45 PM
That was really pretty, and had a lot emotions in it, keep up the good work Erk!

Blades Of Nightmare
12-16-2004, 05:59 PM
wow

Silver Winchester
02-18-2005, 09:22 PM
Great. My brother.