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bloodlover
12-09-2004, 12:25 AM
my heors are dead they died in my head. people have gone people have came yet in the end its all the same i came to this place alone i shall come out alone everyone that i cared for has abandn me alone away never to trust agane never to love again if i cant love no more then why do i live is my life pontliss are is it all in my head i dont understand anything you left me an thats all i know but why whene i loved you so i new this pain was going to kill but for days on end i hoped it wouldit happen yet it did and im all alone no one to care for me no one to talk to no one to love my famlye is gone there loucked away they thowea away the key and i got stucked with no were to hide no were to go but yet i still wont give up my hope.

ReiRei
12-09-2004, 01:51 AM
it's very well written but I think it should be 'abandoned and again' you have a knack here and I would like to read more

bloodlover
12-10-2004, 08:01 PM
thanks

Blades Of Nightmare
12-16-2004, 06:01 PM
sweet