I really cant think of a title

[Jou-chan]

I dont know this poem is ok. Still not my best work *sigh*

Good-bye sweet dreams
Your nothing but a memory
Good-bye to hope
Your nothing but what use to be inside

Hello to pain
Your everything that makes my world black
Hello to hatred
You took the place of the love I now lack

Sweet dreams will never find me
New hope lost in Misery's ocean
Pain found sad but true
Hatred is now in deep motion


Doesn't make much sense and its short *sigh*

[ReiRei]

actually in some odd way it does make sense....but I love it Jou-chan keep it up!!

[Watari]

it makes sense Jou-chan, and it's an awesome poem..keep up the good work..

[Ronin Kai]

I enjoyed it...it truly does make sence

[Jou-chan]

Thank you....I wish I could have made it longer oh well thats just way it so happened to come out....

[Blades Of Nightmare]

keep up the good work

[.com person]

Your poem was muy fastastic!!!