Carnival, the devil

[Fuu]

Editiiing!!!

[Dark Shadow]

ummm... even though it seems like a good character, I think you also had to look at other character's posts about their char. I told you that the ... most used rule was to post it like others.

It lacks some detail, like known attacks, what kind of "world" thread would you like to join and adjust him to fit, some weapons, his aligment and some other stuff.

[Fuu]

ok ok i will add the other things but
but in the thing you said as "post like the other ones" it means that have to make it in the format..
Name:
Age:
height:
power:
etc etc...? i dont like that much that format but if i had to do it like that i will modify it..
and about the world... i have to join one or i can create my own one??

[Mac]

Well, you don't have to do it in that exact format; the great thing about role-play is that everyone is different, but so long as you state the details somewhere it's fine.

such as:

since in the first section (paragraph) you explained his name, his age and what he looks like, you could add more details about his appearance there (such as his height) and similarly you could go into detail about some of his powers and abilities where you mentioned that he can cause people nightmares. You should also mention what key weaknesses he has, to give a sense of balance.

Also you can make your own thread if you can't find an (active) one for your character to join. Maybe Dyne or Pix can help you on that as I'm currently only active in one thread and for the moment no new characters are allowed to join it x.x


I also said this in the chatbox but I think you missed it; you're new to role-playing, right? Or that was what I thought when you asked about the RP area. If so, I think what you've put here is a great start for a character as there's a lot of areas that you can improve on over time and create something really good with. :) <- evil smiley.

[Dark Shadow]

I already explained further and gave him a place he could join without problems or editing the profile.

Home thread suits this one best. As for the others, on the world, this character doesn't fit.

[Fuu]

later im gonna fix it, i need time to let my imagination flow, thanks for the dat xD
hmm i can use this one for the home section if you think its more appropiate.. and i can create another one to play in the "THe World"
but i still dont understand which type of character is required for the world section.... Dyne PM me please~