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ReiRei
11-30-2004, 06:33 AM
I gave the proper I do's and do not's for this story, please tell me how you like it.

I don't own YYH but I do own Takara, Tenshi, and Hoseki.


"Daddy, I'm hungry!" whined Takara.

"Me too!" whined Hoseki.

I looked at Tenshi do you want to put your two cents in Tenshi?" I asked.

"No sir" he said.

"Good, help me with the twins" I said as I pulled up to the pet store.

"My tail and ears are covered daddy" Takara said proudly.

"Me too!" said Hoseki.

"Don't worry daddy I've had mine covered since we left" I said.

I nodded and smiled. Tenshi grabbed Hoseki first and set him down on the ground next to the van, then he grabbed Takara

and set her down and closed the door.

"Daddy please carry me?" Takara asked. "No baby, you need to walk ok? Take my hand. Hoseki take Tenshi's hand" I told

them. "Awww daddy..." she whined. "Takara, stop it!" I said. She quit her whining and took my hand.

"Good girl" I said as we walked in the store.

The person behind the counter looked at us oddly. "Can I help you find something?" he asks me.

"No, thanks...I know what I came for" I said tugging Takara's hand and walking down aisles.

"Daddy are we getting what I think we're getting?" she asked.

"Hai we are princess. That's why I came here to get many different flavours" I told her.

She smiled her biggest smile and put some treats into the basket. "This is fun daddy!" she said happily.

"I'm glad baby" I said as I picked a few cans out everyone would eat.

"Daddy...I'm hungry" Hoseki whined at me.

"I know baby, I'm almost done...hold on ok? I asked as I turned around with Takara. "Why don't you two pick out a new toy

for yourselves?" I told them.

"YAY!!!" They said happily and pulled Tenshi with them.

I continued to looked around for other things that we could need in the house especially with two little ones running around

in the house. I sighed knowing my husband is a fire demon and isn't really all that interested in our fox life...oh well, he's

stuck with me for life as I go down where the three of them are. As I approach I see a woman giving them money. She gives

the twins five dollars each and she gives Tenshi ten for being a good big brother and walks out of the store with her

purchase before I could stop her from giving them money.

Takara looked up at me. "Is something wrong daddy?" she asks.

".........." I don't say anything but take her by the hand as I lead them up to the counter. I sigh and tell them to put their

money away and they can use it later. They all nod and put their money away.

"Is that everything for you today Mr. Minamino?" the clerk asks me.

"Hai. That's it" I said as I take my wallet out of my pocket.

"That will be $30.45" he said.

I looked at him in shock. "You've raised your prices....no wait, I brought my kids with me...." I said as I pulled out the money

and handing it too him. He handed me back the change and Takara seen the quarters and her eye lit up.

"Daddy, can Hoseki and I have a quarter for some candy? Please?" she begged.

"It's not can Takara, it's 'May Hoseki and I have a quarter each for candy" I said correcting her. She looked at me in shock.

Ask the right way or I put the change away and you'll have to wait" I told her.

"Daddy, may Hoseki and I have a quarter each for candy" she asked near tears.

I had people looking at me like I did something wrong. "Nani?" I asked as I pulled one of the fox treats out and popped it

opened and took one out and ate it. I watched as people disappeared from the front of the store to the bathroom. I looked

around for any cameras and saw there were none so I broke into the candy machine and got a bag and took the candy for the

kits and left with them smirking proudly to myself as we left.

Sei Akujin
11-30-2004, 06:49 AM
Very well written. I salute your work, Rei. Very good.

Review:

Two thumbs up

ReiRei
11-30-2004, 06:52 AM
Thank you Saint Evil, I appreciate your complients

Dark Shadow
12-04-2004, 05:14 AM
yes!, this is how a story should be written!...

good story, btw, you changed your nick name, right?

ReiRei
12-04-2004, 05:49 AM
yes I did and ty!