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Sei Akujin
09-21-2004, 05:29 AM
Sorry..........this isn't good..........but as long as I am depressed.........my poetry won't ever be as good as it was..............
I am dying,
forsaken by god,
he hates me,
torments me,
wants to make my life a living hell,
I shun thy god,
I cast my faith out,
desire for thee light is dead,
kill thee light,
kill thee god,
heretic is I,
Forsaken by god.
Sei Akujin
09-21-2004, 05:39 AM
AND KEEP YOUR "that sucks" comments to yourself and DON'T f**king use this as a spam thread.
MajinYajuu
09-21-2004, 09:08 AM
Hey I think it is pretty good. Thats how I feel, for the most part, everyday.
Sei Akujin
09-22-2004, 03:38 AM
thanx
BlackShadow
10-04-2004, 11:27 PM
thats really good. and yet entirely true for a friend of mine. She feels the same and so she stoped believing in him. What she's telling me and her new religion i feel confused and heart broken.
What she told me...... shattered everything i believed in!
I want to cry for not haveing something to believe in. It gives me so much hope and yet i very little now.
Sei Akujin
10-05-2004, 05:53 AM
Believe in yourself then..........you don't have to have guidance from some almight deity(god or goddess)
BlackShadow
10-05-2004, 06:13 AM
thanx i'll keep that in mind
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