(Hi my first post ) Pome - Its Dark

[NinjaFighter]

sweet lol sorry ok.
that was just what was on my mind but here is my pome.


it is called "It's Dark"
When the lights go out it's dark.
When the lies start it's dark.
I am sorry that it is there...
I am sorry you don't care...
When you cry it's dark
When we die it's dark
I am sorry that your there....
I am sorry they don't care.....
When it rains it's dark
When the blood stants it's dark
I am sorry you gave up
I am sorry i will not shut up
When the wind blows it's dark
when the pain shows it is dark
i am sorry it's not fair so sorry it not fair
but i can take the pain i can hear the screams but i will not give up
i am sorry that there is light
i am sorry i can fight
because the dark is never going to get me to say it is dark
so shine bright
when the lights go out it is dark
shine bright



Thanks for reading it. It is about how if life just sucks and you can't find a way to make it not suck lol that. look for the little things and that one friend that will help you shine bright or is shineing bright to get you throw the dark. Tell me what you think and you can add to it or take away form it or just read it or not lol. If you got one that is in the ball park or out of this world tell me i will read it. no lie bye-NF

[ReiRei]

wow, this was really good but pome is spelled 'poem' and I think you were going for 'stains' instead of stants. But other than that it's a really well written poem. Keep it up!

[NinjaFighter]

Thanks!
Sorry i can't spell and it was right out of my head.

[NoirKoneko]

for that being right out of your head, it's pretty good.