Forever Rain

[.com person]

This was orginally posted by me at the creativity fourms.. tell me if you like it... I have lots.. hehe ya way to go stupid me... Some people said this was more of a song then a poem... well anyways tell me what ya think

Today was awful
Same day in two
Same day without you
Everything was planned
Well ok maybe not everything

Forever Rain
Forever Rain
Drew on the flowers with color
Forever Rain
Forever Rain
Forever Rain

Rain gave the plants and everything water
But because of you
Same day as two
You weren't there
You didn't seem to care

Not just the rain is tearing us apart
My Friend
Guess I'll friendship should stop right there and end
Cause my trobules are just bending and breaking

Forever Rain
Forever Rain
Drew on the flowers with color
Forever Rain
Forever Rain
Forever Rain

Forever Rain
Yet a shame
Today it seemed like endless Rain
went as fast or slow as a train
So darn colorful, yet plan and so annoying

Just tell me you'll be there tommrow
I won't give up
No, I won't give in
Even if I have to start all over again

We're going to win
The dream will happen
I just need you there friend
Don't diss me please

3 Friends
1 I'm not sure
2 I'm not sure
2 I'm been paining for so long yet they don't feel like its real
1 I'm not sure she just seems to forget or is it more


Just tell me you'll be there tommrow
I won't give up
No, I won't give in
Even if I have to start all over again

We're going to win
The dream will happen
I just need you there friend
Don't diss me please

I'll squeeze in all the confidence
I'll arise above the rest
The best I can

I just want you to say
Your not going to be like the way I was
Because its just different...

Forever Rain
Forever Rain
Drew on the flowers with color
Forever Rain
Forever Rain
Forever Rain

Forever Rain
Forever Rain
Drew on the flowers with color
Forever Rain
Forever Rain
Forever Rain

Nothing is the same
Everything is the same
Same damn game
Just promise me tommrow my friend you'll be there
And you will care
We will all care

[ReiRei]

in a way it does sound like a song and you're not stupid, just talented. Keep it up!