Zelda
11-28-2004, 05:34 AM
Hmm...well I guess I'll show off some of my work. This is just off the top of my head. It's not a fanfic, just an original fic off the top of my head. ^_^ It's short...so yeah...
Through the forest she ran. Her red hair was wild and full of leaves and twigs. Her fancy white dress was torn and covered in her own blood. Mina cried, her face streaked with scratches, dirt, and tears. Her green eyes were bloodshot from all of the crying. Demons had attacked her village. She didn't know what to do, so she ran for it. To her knowledge she was the only survivor.
An hour passed slowly by. Mina was worn out. She couldn't handle it anymore. She collapsed to her knees and gasped for breath. A demon lunged at her from behind and she screamed. Suddenly an arrow shot through the cat demon as if answering her call. Even more freaked out, Mina went running again. She didn't realize that she was going in the direction that the arrow had come from. To be honest, Mina didn't really care. More demons came at her from behind. Still more, they began to charge at her from the left and right. Suddenly demons went charging at her from the three directions. She ducked and the quicker two from the left and right crashed into each other. The demon from behind however, tackled Mina. The force knocked the exhausted girl out.
Mina woke up some time later. She was in an old fashioned inn. An Elf was standing by her side. A warm wash cloth was on her head. "Ungh," moaned Mina as she got up. "What happened?"
"Well, you were tackled. I sent an arrow into the cat demon and then the rest backed down. I brought you here. You should get some rest. You haven't been sleeping for very long."
Mina nodded and fell asleep again.
So I guess that's all I'll put for now. I don't know if it's any good...
Through the forest she ran. Her red hair was wild and full of leaves and twigs. Her fancy white dress was torn and covered in her own blood. Mina cried, her face streaked with scratches, dirt, and tears. Her green eyes were bloodshot from all of the crying. Demons had attacked her village. She didn't know what to do, so she ran for it. To her knowledge she was the only survivor.
An hour passed slowly by. Mina was worn out. She couldn't handle it anymore. She collapsed to her knees and gasped for breath. A demon lunged at her from behind and she screamed. Suddenly an arrow shot through the cat demon as if answering her call. Even more freaked out, Mina went running again. She didn't realize that she was going in the direction that the arrow had come from. To be honest, Mina didn't really care. More demons came at her from behind. Still more, they began to charge at her from the left and right. Suddenly demons went charging at her from the three directions. She ducked and the quicker two from the left and right crashed into each other. The demon from behind however, tackled Mina. The force knocked the exhausted girl out.
Mina woke up some time later. She was in an old fashioned inn. An Elf was standing by her side. A warm wash cloth was on her head. "Ungh," moaned Mina as she got up. "What happened?"
"Well, you were tackled. I sent an arrow into the cat demon and then the rest backed down. I brought you here. You should get some rest. You haven't been sleeping for very long."
Mina nodded and fell asleep again.
So I guess that's all I'll put for now. I don't know if it's any good...