These Words

[MajinYajuu]

Ok so I'm going back to my sad attempts at poetry....


Dearly beloved are you listening
I’m about to tell you what I could never say,
Not yet willing but it has to be told
That with out your light I would drown in the darkness,
Forever lost from the touch of you kiss
So these words I say to you now
Treat them not lightly for they are from my heart
I love you

[Feral]

Ok so I'm going back to my sad attempts at poetry....


Dearly beloved are you listening
I’m about to tell you what I could never say,
Not yet willing but it has to be told
That with out your light I would drown in the darkness,
Forever lost from the touch of you kiss
So these words I say to you now
Treat them not lightly for they are from my heart
I love you

Sad attempts? The only thing sad was the poem, good job.

[MajinYajuu]

Well this is my last poem of such sort, I had this running through my head for some stupid reason. But now that this is done I can go back to doing those which better reflect the person that I am...

[Hiryuu Megami23]

So, is this about you then? or someone specific?

[MajinYajuu]

So, is this about you then? or someone specific?

You know me well enough to know it ain't about me, Miss Smarty-pants & I don't have a specific someone to write about.

Looks to me as though your fishing for something

[Hiryuu Megami23]

I didn't know that you weren't writing about yourself in that one, it confused me a bit. I don't fish for information. If I really wanted to know who it was for, I'd ask you straight out, you know that. Besides, if I were fishing I would be out on a boat and baiting my own hook.

[FallenAngel]

Now that was touching. When did you write it?

Out of curiousity, do you, Darth Yajuu, and you, Hiryuu Megami23 go to the same school? Since you know eachother well.

[ReiRei]

Yajuu that was really good this poem is really very good indeed, keep up your writing

[MajinYajuu]

Now that was touching. When did you write it?

Out of curiousity, do you, Darth Yajuu, and you, Hiryuu Megami23 go to the same school? Since you know eachother well.

I wrote it a few days ago

As for my & Hiryuu, well were in different countries so I guess you can rule out the same school cenario there, that along with the fact that I left school 7 years ago.

[Hiryuu Megami23]

as well as my having left school five years ago. we only know each other pretty well because we talk a lot and not only that, I've tried to kill him too many times to count here on ACF (succeeded only 2 times though. once before the great purge and the other just last night).

[MajinYajuu]

yes but as the saying goes

"You can't keep a good man down"

So I'm back for more

[Blades Of Nightmare]

sweet