I'm not in love

[.com person]

I can wonder why
As I look up in the sky
He's so perfect
But I'm not in love
Only fools... Only fools fall in love
Before you.... Before you....
Never knew I fitted in so much
When you were new
When you first came
It was absurity, you retard
It was absuirty, you retard
I know my mind can lie
I try
But its so hard
At least I got it easy
I'm not in love but somehow can't help thinking...
Maybe someday but not in love right know
But baby you got me falling still
Not in love but ........ something
So this is a sign?
Your so close to mine?
This isn't love but so close
I can make the most
I trip everyday all over my self trying not to fit in
You got it good... you aren't nervous
Me though I'm tripping all over myself
Hardly say a thing ... always forget what to say
Will be the same way everyday for awhile
Thoughts in a big pile
Your smile is worth a mile
It's absurity....
So much kindness
Who could have guessed
Your so close to love
One day I'll tell you
Maybe one day I'll actually fall for you
But I know being so young, it's not likely ( only in a dream) ( only in a dream)

[Erk Mizuhara]

um...it's different. But i like it. I like the way it's written, and i agree that only fools fall in love. But, having said that, i'm a fool, too.
in all, a good job, and keep up the good work.

[ReiRei]

very good ^_^ it's very well written and I enjoyed reading it

[.com person]

I thought you'd all hate it ... hehe but thanks. :)

[Kazaku]

very good I almost like it better than my work

[Zelda]

Nice job. ^_^

I can't write poetry at all. I write stories instead. ^_^

Nice job, again.

[Kazaku]

i love making poems

[>Liquíd<]

It brings up the long debate, are you a fool to fall in love? Is it better to feel something, then nothing at all?

[Kazaku]

shut up and get in to the poem LIquid

[>Liquíd<]

Well now, that wasn't very friendly.

[Kazaku]

so this poetry which suppose relate to some thing about that and I don't mess around with poetry

[>Liquíd<]

I merely put a different emphasis on the poem. Isn't that the beauty of poetry? Everyone seems a different viewpoint, and interprets in their own way.

[Kazaku]

yes pure positive or pure negative nothing in between

[>Liquíd<]

yes pure positive or pure negative nothing in between

Why? Is poetry American television? Where the good and bad are so clearly labelled, it is just unrealistic.

Life isn't black and white. It's all grey, and therefore poetry can be gray to.

[Kazaku]

no poetry is mostly on how someone feels so its a opinion so you chose if its good bad not inbetween

[>Liquíd<]

Good and bad can come together. Look at this poem, it was good that she fell in love. She had a wonderful time together, something she would have not experienced if she hadn't of fallen in love. However it is also bad, because now she has broken up and is in utter depression. Something she wouldn't have had to go through if she had never fallen in love. But, if she hadn't of fallen in love she would never have receieved the good. So in this case, good and bad go hand in hand. It is neither one, or the other.

[Kazaku]

yes a neutral poem but her poem wasn't nuetral so no nuetral staments

[>Liquíd<]

Personally I see neutrality all over it. Her mind fighting, over the good and the bad. She knows it's just a crush, but wants to experience love, even if she knows it'll end up in tears. She is fightened, yet excited. The good, the bad, it is neither, it is purely a neutral struggle.

[Kazaku]

in your poem putting a nuetral statement is okay

[>Liquíd<]

It is not my poem, it is .com's. I am merely putting what I read into her work, I, as no one else, unless she tells us, know exactly what the poem is about. Only .com knew what she meant when she wrote it.

[FallenAngel]

*Stands up and gives a round of applause*

Very good poem I must say. I love to write poetry but I don't like to share them.

I think your poem would also make very good lyrics. You should think about maybe singing it sometime.

[.com person]

Personally I see neutrality all over it. Her mind fighting, over the good and the bad. She knows it's just a crush, but wants to experience love, even if she knows it'll end up in tears. She is fightened, yet excited. The good, the bad, it is neither, it is purely a neutral struggle.

Yes... :roll: :oops:

[Kazaku]

well you prove me wrong this time but I will be back[I always wanted to say that]