Tears from my love

[Tohru*]

I hate when you crying
You promised you would'nt
but you do, it's weird when
you cry i cry as if we're connected
i guess we are you are my love
we should cry together
forget what i said
keep on crying
(began to cry)

[ReiRei]

it's very good tohru and it's wouldn't you misplaced the ' in the word...but it's very good and very sad....keep up your writing ^_^

[.com person]

Short but cool ;^^

[Tohru*]

i did it again !!!
i hate that!!!

[Erk Mizuhara]

a very short, concise, to the point poem. nicely written, and something that couples may be able to relate to. Very good.

[Tohru*]

thank you.