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Rena Rose
11-18-2004, 09:08 PM
Silent Letter
by: Larc~en~Ciel

Heart of Broken Ash
by: PRH

I look at you as you leave
my heart is gone
I have nothing left here~
what should I do now
i'm alone
there's no one
to comfort me...

so stay with me I want you here
now i can sleep well
when you're here
i want you to stay
always~ dying now....
Close my eyes

my heart is broken ash
nothing left
i'm all alone
no ones here~
i can't
be held by you
you're away
there's nothing left

stay with me there's some thing i need to say
it's time to go into
the night now
what is there to me?
What can
i tell you?

Good bye to you

*interlude*

tell my heart it's not over yet
please come back
I don't want to be alone
what can I tell you
I have nothing
to say.. now but
I love you

i'm crying my eyes out now
the broken ash is here
waiting for you
when can you save
my heart
from it's fate
ohhh

Good bye to me....

Erk Mizuhara
11-26-2004, 08:12 PM
nice poem, Rosalie. It strikes me with some effect. I'm sorry i haven't commented on your other poems, but i've been busy, and college filtered ACF. ><

TonyTonyChopper
11-26-2004, 08:14 PM
I really like that poem.. it's kind of appropriate for what I'm going through right now in my life.