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White Mage
11-17-2004, 12:12 AM
A long time ago,
my english teacher told me to write a poem using a bunch of synomns dealing with the same word,
and my word was 'Empty'....

I thought I should post it on here becasue it is quite good...
Here it is...


Child, defensively bare child,
Do not let the vacant wind blow you away.
Child, clearly abandoned child,
Try not to have a void day.
Child, certainly barren child,
Do not draw nearer to that blank spot.
Child, utterly exhausted child,
Try to come back from your deserted cot.
Child, completely drained child,
You have not been totally emptied yet!
Child, you are not empty, so do not fret…

ReiRei
11-17-2004, 12:24 AM
ooh very good!

White Mage
11-17-2004, 12:30 AM
ooh very good!

Thank you very much Hiei!!!

ReiRei
11-17-2004, 01:13 AM
you're very welcome!

Dark Mage
03-02-2005, 12:05 AM
I like it!

I remember it!
I wrote mine with humor...

LOL

Mine was stupid...

I hope this doesn't mean you...

Seraphim
03-02-2005, 12:33 AM
This reminds me so much of a poem I wrote...

frank
03-02-2005, 03:56 AM
The best compliment that I can offer is to tell you that I wish I had written this poem.

White Mage
03-29-2005, 05:17 PM
Thank you frank!
Really, sera?

LOL... I know AJ...
This poem is just how I feel....

Seraphim
04-02-2005, 03:14 AM
Thank you frank!
Really, sera?

LOL... I know AJ...
This poem is just how I feel....

Lol, yah. =)

Don't want to post it up, though. >.> It's too frikkin' long.

White Mage
04-23-2005, 05:40 AM
okay... but if you ever feel the urge to post it, tell me please! Thanks!