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Tohru*
11-15-2004, 11:19 PM
In the morning you'll wake
There I lie by your side
And I will Kiss you on the cheek
And you'll say "I love you"
Even for a simple moment
My simple love is just for you
In the evening you'll come home
There I stand by your side
and I'll kiss you on the cheek
And you'll say "I love you"
Even for a simple moment
My love is simply for you

Even if my love is just simple and meaningless
Just for that simple moment you that my love was
Simply for you

White Mage
11-16-2004, 06:24 PM
This is a real pretty poem Tohru...

I think it's correct in every way you look at it...

Feral
11-16-2004, 06:28 PM
This is a real pretty poem Tohru...

I think it's correct in every way you look at it...

I would second that...except you missed out kiss in....'and I'll you on the cheek'
:)

--Lain--

ReiRei
11-16-2004, 07:39 PM
*claps* very good Tohru, very well thought out and very well written ^_^

Tohru*
11-16-2004, 11:23 PM
I hate when i forget words :oops:

White Mage
11-16-2004, 11:23 PM
What brought that on?