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Erk Mizuhara
11-15-2004, 04:51 PM
Come to me
Come with me
be with me
be my own
of all i really want,
I want you

All my life since I laid eyes on you,
I've only wanted to be with you,
to never leave your side,
to always see you smile,
to make you happy and pleased.
Just you, and not another.

Listen, i understand that I'm not your type,
or that you don't like me in 'that way',
but why treat me like weeds on the lawn,
or sometihng on the bottom of your shoe.
You hurt me, I think you know that.
But you don't care. I know that.

Erk Mizuhara
11-15-2004, 04:55 PM
meh. I tried.

Xelloss
11-15-2004, 05:20 PM
Sounds like the begining of a modern day song = )

Xelloss
11-15-2004, 05:21 PM
I think you inspired me to make a song about death!

Erk Mizuhara
11-15-2004, 05:21 PM
...really? say, have you read my other works?

Xelloss
11-15-2004, 05:23 PM
not yet. they all under this category?

Erk Mizuhara
11-15-2004, 05:27 PM
yes. The Choice and The End.

White Mage
11-16-2004, 06:58 PM
You are very deep...

I can relate to this poem/song...

I shall wait for your next one!

;)

ReiRei
11-16-2004, 07:41 PM
very nicely done Erk, I agree it kinda sounds like a song, but it's very good