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Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-14-2004, 12:30 AM
This is not a fiction...just a part of some story i planned to fit into one of the stories i am working on.


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VENGEANCE IS ALWAYS SWEET…

Vengeance is sweet.
He watched her come out from her work place, tailed her for about a few meters till they came to a dark alley. She knew someone was following her but she continued to walk faster hoping she had mistaken. She turned back only to see the man follow her. As she walked faster so did the man. Then she started to run.
“Run faster while you still can,” the man exclaimed.
As the woman ran, she turned back to see how far was the man from her. Before she even knew, the man was behind her.
He caught the *****. Pushed her to the wall and then pointed his trusty blade against her throat.
She squealed and tried to call for help, but in vain.
“No one takes this dark alley,” he said in a soft tune.
“So, it’s just you, and me,” he added.
He took the blade and slashed her neck. The head was disconnected from the body. It fell and rolled down onto the ground. The body slid down from the wall and lied motionless.
The man then picked up the head by the hair and then muttered some words, “You deserve to die after all the anger you’ve caused me.”
He then flings the lifeless head into the rubbish dump and walked away.
He laughs insanely…

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ReiRei
11-14-2004, 12:35 AM
o_O...wow...um, that's good so far

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-14-2004, 12:38 AM
I'm really bad at writing stories^^;

ReiRei
11-14-2004, 12:42 AM
it's ok it's very good

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-14-2004, 12:44 AM
I was wondering if you could teach me to write. I tend to write short sentences which eventually end up like poetries.-_-;
I do suck at writing.
*pls...?

ReiRei
11-14-2004, 12:48 AM
hai, I'll help you, no you don't suck hiro...what exactly is this story about it?

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-14-2004, 01:00 AM
I don't know yet. But I'll try to insert this part in. I do enjoy the violence bit the best
That's why i tend to write them first.^^;
But i've lost all my other data of the rest of the story. I'll just have to start rewriting again.
Sorry, can't let you see the other bits i've written.
*bangs self...Why didn't i get a back up...*

ReiRei
11-14-2004, 01:06 AM
Hiro, are you ok? it's alright I understand

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-14-2004, 01:07 AM
^^ I'm ok don't worry

ReiRei
11-14-2004, 01:09 AM
^_^ good

DEATH-CROW
11-17-2004, 10:06 PM
hey that was cool pal ! i like vaiolence too ! and you know what ? your writting is good . some others add a lot of *discribing which dosent fit events like violence and all . cause they make it look so slow . anyway ..
keep up the good work !