Hikaze-chapter 1

[ReiRei]

I climbed on the couch and cuddled with mama. "Hi baby boy" she said pulling me into her lap. "Hi mama" I said cuddling against her. "Where are your daddies?" she asked. "Daddy Kurama is still at work and daddy is upstairs pouting because I didn't feel like practicing with him" I said. "Oh...did you do your lessons today?" she asked. I nodded. "Why can't I go to school mama? I really don't like being home schooled" I said. "Hi-chan, your daddies and I decided that since Tenshi was home schooled, that you and the twins would be home schooled as well" she said. "I don't like it mama, can I please go to public school?" I asked her. "I don't know Hi-chan, I'll talk to your daddies tonight" she said. I nodded and stayed in her lap.

A little while later daddy Kurama came home. "Hi Kuramie, how was your day?" mama asked him. "Better now that I am home" he said leaning down to kiss her and ruffle my hair. "Hi daddy Kurama" I sighed. "What's wrong Hi-chan?" he asked sitting down and putting mama's feet in his lap. "I asked mama if I could go to public school instead of being home schooled" I said. "Oh, I see. What's wrong with being home schooled with the twins?" he asked. "Nothing really. I just don't want to go to Master Genkai's everyday. I want to be around kids my age...that's all" I said. "Well we have to talk to daddy yet" mama said. "I know" I said. "You know what?" daddy asked. "That mama and daddy Kurama have to talk to you" I said. "About what?" he asked. "Hi-chan's schooling, he doesn't want to be home schooled anymore" mama said. "Hi-chan, before you were born..your mama daddy and I agreed it would be to dangerous for you in public school. So we agreed that home schooling was in your best interest" daddy Kurama said. I growled softly. "But I can start deciding what's good for me right? Please? I just want this one thing. I'll behave myself, I won't lose my temper, I won't hurt anyone...I promise" I said near tears. "Hi-chan, go play in your room while we talk" mama said. "Okay" I said getting off of her lap. "We'll come talk to you when we're done" daddy Kurama said. I nodded and went upstairs. I sat in my room and just prayed to Kamiya that my parents would allow me this one thing.

"They'll never go for it Hi-chan" I heard Hoseki say. "Shut up Hoseki" Takara said. She stepped inside my room. "Hi-chan, I hope you can go. I know how unhappy you are. You'll be very lucky to go. Hoseki and I won't be able to go because kitsunes aren't allowed in school like the one you are wanting to go too" she told me. "Takara, do you think they'll let me?" I asked her. "I really don't know, but I support you Hi-chan" she said playing with the white in my hair. I smiled a little "Thanks Takara" I said. She smiled and hugged me. "It won't happen Hi-chan" Hoseki said. "Back off Hoseki and leave Hi-chan alone" I heard daddy Kurama say. I grabbed Takara's hand and waited with baited breath for the news. "Hi-chan we have decided, probably against your mother's wishes to let you try going to a public school. But, you mustn't fight, blow up the school or get suspended for any reason...one fight or suspension and it's back to home schooling, ok?" daddy Kurama said. "Hai!" I said hugging Takara. "Congratulations Hi-chan, I'm proud of you" she said hugging me back.

"I can't believe this!" Hoseki said. "What's wrong Hoseki?" daddy Kurama asked. "Why does he get what he wants and we have to practially beg for it?!" he nearly screamed. "That's enough Hoseki!" mama said. He looked at her and calmed down a bit. "That's not true and you know it Hoseki! You're just jealous because you aren't the baby anymore" Takara said. Everyone waited for Hoseki to answer. I watched as he dropped his head down and nodded. Daddy shook his head and came into my room. "Promise us you won't do anything to get kicked out" he said. "I promise, I'll be on my very best behaviour" I said. He nodded. "Don't worry sweetheart, he'll be fine" daddy said. Mama shrugged and left the room. Daddy Kurama followed her to comfort her.

[Dark Shadow]

It is good, althought, it is a little difficult to read, if you separate the dialogs, it would improve a lot....

try that in the next post, okay?

[ReiRei]

I'll try ^_^

[ReiRei]

Here's chapter 2 to my story....as I write I will post it, please give me some time...enjoy!



Daddy Kurama and mama took me to school and got me registered then too me school shopping for supplies. "Baby, you don't have to do this" mama said. "I know mama, but I want too" I said as we approached the checkout line.

"Shut up Urameshi" I heard Uncle Kazuma say. I looked past daddy Kurama and saw Yusuke harrassing Uncle Kazuma. "Kazuma, what's going on?" mama asked him. "Oh yami! I didn't know you were here. What's all the school supplies for?" I heard him say. "I'm here too Uncle Kazuma, and the school supplies are mine" I said standing beside mama. "Yeah right" Yusuke said. I scowled at him as did mama. "Congratualtions Hi-chan. I'm so proud of you! Don't fight ok? It solves nothing" he said. "Okay Uncle Kazuma, I won't" I said. "I can't believe you're letting him go to a public school. You know he's going to start fights" Yusuke said forgetting I was there. I stood there and bit my lip as daddy Kurama paid for it all.

"Let's go" he said gently pulling mama and I was from Yusuke. "He's such a jerk! I can't stand him!" mama said. I climbed in the van and buckled up and looked out the window and tried not to cry. "Daddy Kurama, why does everything seem to be going wrong? I can understand why mama doesn't want me to go...buy why is everyone else wanting me to fail?" I as a tear slid down my cheek and turned into a tear gem. "I don't know Hi-chan. Please don't cry. I have nothing but faith that you will make it" he said. I smiled a little. "Mama, please allow me to try this. I just mainly want to make friends" I told her. She sighed and just looked out the window. When we got home Takara helped us get everything in and Hoseki was no where to be found. Daddy came downstairs as mama sat on the couch and pouted.

"Can you believe they are letting Hi-chan go to a public school?" I heard Hoseki telling someone. "Well Hoseki, if Hi-chan's not happy; then you have to take what he want to heart" Tenshi said. "Figures you would side with them!" he said leaving Tenshi to feel confused. Tenshi walked in and sat down after he hugged mama. "Tenshi, do you think Hi-chan will do okay?" mama asked. "Mama, he'll be fine. I'm sure they'll notify you first if nothing goes right" Tenshi said. Mama nodded and smiled. "I bet he'll flirt with the girls" daddy Kurama said. Mama laughed. "I hope not, he's too young" she said nudging me and giggling. I smiled at her. "I bet they'll fall for his eyes" Takara said coming down and sat on Tenshi's lap. Tenshi hugged her and nodded. "What brings you home Tenshi?" I asked cuddling up in mama's lap. "I missed my family and I want you all at my graduation" he said adjusting his glasses. "Already? Has it been four years? That was a long residency Tenshi" mama said. "I know, but I wanted to make sure I got it all" he said. "Even me?" I asked. "Hai Hi-chan, even you. You're my brother. When you're graduation comes around I want to see it ok?" he said. I nodded happily. "You found a mate didn't you? Is it serious? Male or female?" daddy asked. Everyone looked at daddy then Tenshi shocked. "It's not serious yet. The person I'm seeing is male. We're not ready to take our relationship further yet" Tenshi said. Mama smiled. "Taking after your daddies huh Tenshi?" she asked. He smiled and blushed. "More like testing the water" he said. "Take your time Tenshi" daddy Kurama said. "I will dad, don't worry" he said. "Hi-chan, when you start school?" Tenshi asked me. "The day after tomorrow" I said. "So Saturday then?" he asked. "Hai!" I said. "Hi-chan, go get changed and ready for bed" mama said. "Getting him on a school schedule?" Takara asked. Mama nodded. I got down and went upstairs and got ready for bed. As I was getting ready mama came upstairs. "Hi-chan, are you really sure you want to do this?" she asked. "Hai, I'm positive" I said. "Teeth brushed?" she asked. I nodded. "Go give hugs and kisses to everyone and get in bed" she said sitting down on the bed. I ran downstairs and hugged Tenshi, Takara, daddy, daddy Kurama and Hoseki. "You won't make it one day before you get beaten up or kicked out" Hoseki said. "HOSEKI! That's enough!" daddy Kurama said sharply. "I'll show you Hoseki! I'll make you eat your words!" I said as I ran upstairs. "Hi-chan!" daddy called after me. I climbed on the bed, laid down and cried. "Hi-chan! What's wrong?" mama asked rubbing my back. "Hoseki said I would last a day" I said playing with my tear gems. "Don't listen to him Hi-chan. What did you tell him?" she asked. "That I'll show him" I said climbing under the covers knocking my tear gems to the floor. "That wasn't a good idea baby" mama said sighing. "I know, gomen nasai mama. But I'm going to prove to him I can and will make it" I told her. "She laid down beside me and started singing softly to me as I closed my eyes and fell asleep.

[Dark Shadow]

it is good, but, it would be better, if you... errr.... follow my last advice? .... post the dialogs separated.... wait, you are writting it as if it is a diary, right?, then it is alright, just try to give more space to the story, the last part was difficult to follow

[ReiRei]

yes, it's like Hi-chan's diary....I will try but I've already had this written up...but I will when I post the next chapter

[Dark Shadow]

okay then, i write my story right out of my mind, i just post what i consider it would be next, i also have it writted, more than, 100 pages, but, they are in spanish, so, it is better for me to just post...

Also, i don't carry the archive with me...

[ReiRei]

well I wrote this at work when I was working...I have I'm sure over a hundred pages as well....I'm just being lazy to post them... heh ^^

[Dark Shadow]

eh, i am the same, whenever i have time... i just... put it aside, unless i really want to continue writting...

[ReiRei]

The day I started school I was up a couple hours early. I went downstairs and saw daddy Kurama making breakfast.

"Morning daddy Kurama" I said. "Good morning Hi-chan. Are you hungry? Are you excited? What do you want for lunch?" he asked all in one breath.

"Hai, I'm hungry and excited. I would like a peanut butter and jelly sandwich with chips, juice and a red apple please" I said as he set my food down in front of me. "I will make it for you. What kind of juice?" he asked. "Do we have a juice mixture?" I asked. "I don't know. If we do then I'll include it, if not then what kind?" he asked. "Grape juice" I said sighing as I bit into my toast. He went into the kitchen and looked through the fridge. When I looked up I saw Hoseki.

"I guess we'll see you about noon?" he sneered. "I suddenly lost the will to finish my breakfast" I said getting down from the table. I took my dishes into the kitchen and found the juice I wanted. I went upstairs and got ready for school.

When I walked back into my room Takara was in there. "Hi-chan, when you get home after school will you tell me about it? I want to know what it's like" she said.

I nodded and sat on my bed. "I'm excited but I'm nervous and scared. What if no one likes me Takara?" I asked sitting with my back to her. She brushed and braided my hair for me. "Hikaze, you'll be fine. It's okay to be scared and nervous" she said as I turned around.

"I got an idea" I said. "Nani?" she asked. "Ask daddy Kurama if you, him and mama could pick me up after school. I'm going to prove to Hoseki I can do it!" I said standing up. She smiled.

"You got your tear gem?" she asked. I nodded and showed her. "Good luck Hi-chan" she said kissing my cheek. "Is daddy giving you a ride?" she asked. "Hai!" I said walking out of my room and downstairs.

"Good timing Hi-chan, I was just about to call you down" daddy Kurama said handing me my bag as I put my shoes on.

"Before I forget, your mama told me last night..if you get too scared and you feel like you cannot do it, call us and we'll come and get you" he said. "No way, I'm not giving Hoseki that satisfaction daddy" I said slinging my coat over my arm.

"I'll let her know you said that" he said grabbing his keys and putting his shoes on. "Bye Hi-chan! See you after school!" Takara said. I nodded and walked out to wait.

"Takara, schoolwork now" daddy Kurama said. "Hai!" she said going upstairs to get her stuff. We got in the car and got settled in and ready to leave. I looked around and pouted. "He must have forgotten...." I said sadly.

"He didn't forget Hi-chan. I think he went to do something. He'll be home when you get home from school" daddy Kurama told me as he started the car and backed out of the drive and heading towards the school.

When we pulled up to the school I suddenly got nervous. "Hikaze, you'll be fine. Calm down and breathe" he said. I nodded and grabbed my stuff. "Will you tell mama I love her and I'll see her after school" I asked him.

"I will" he said. I opened the door and got out of the car. I took a deep breathe and looked around. "Alright Hi-chan, dont' let your demon side show" I thought to myself. I walked up to the front door and walked in.

I stopped at the office and introduced myself "Oh yes. Minamino, Hikaze" the lady said. She looked to the right to call another student about my age over.

"William, will you show Hikaze to his classroom please?" "Yes, Mrs. Summersin" he said with a different accent which intrguied me. He first walked me to my locker than my classroom.

"Excuse me, but where are you from?" I asked polietly. "Why do you want to know? Are you going to ask me to leave your country?" he asked rudely.

"N-no, I didn't say that" I said. "Then what?" he continued. "I like your accent is all and I haven't heard one like it before" I explained. "Oh, sorry. I'm from London, England" he said.

"What's England like?" I asked as he walked me to my class. "I'll tell you at lunch ok?" he asked. I nodded and took a deep breathe. "Hikaze, you'll be fine" he told me. "I hope so" I said stepping into the classroom. Everyone looked up. "Are you Hikaze Minamino?" the teacher asked.

"H-hai" I stuttered. "Welcome to the fourth grade" she said. "Arigatou" I said. "My name is Ms. Tendo and I'll be your teacher for the year" she said smiling. I smiled back. "Go sit next to Alyssa" she said. "Hai" I said and went to sit down next to her.

She smiled at me and I smiled back. We went through the morning learning all sorts of different things then what I was learning at home...Takara is going to be jealous of me...oh well.

The teacher released us for lunch and I sat down in the back of the classroom and ate my lunch. " 'Ello Hikaze" I heard someone say. "Ohayo William, please sit down" I said.

He sat down as we ate and talked about many different things. When lunch was over he went back to the office and I continued my first day at school know I had just made Hoseki eat his words.

[Dark Shadow]

seems good, hope you post more soon

[ReiRei]

I will as soon as I get my computer up and running. I really enjoy this story and I'm done writing it out, I just need to put it on the computer

[ReiRei]

The day I started school I was up a couple hours early. I went downstairs and saw daddy Kurama making breakfast. "Morning daddy Kurama" I said. "Good morning Hi-chan. Are you hungry? Are you excited? What do you want for lunch?" he asked all in one breath. "Hai, I'm hungry and excited. I would like a peanut butter and jelly sandwich with chips, juice and a red apple please" I said as he set my food down in front of me. "I will make it for you. What kind of juice?" he asked. "Do we have a juice mixture?" I asked. "I don't know. If we do then I'll include it, if not then what kind?" he asked. "Grape juice" I said sighing as I bit into my toast. He went into the kitchen and looked through the fridge. When I looked up I saw Hoseki. "I guess we'll see you about noon?" he sneered. "I suddenly lost the will to finish my breakfast" I said getting down from the table. I took my dishes into the kitchen and found the juice I wanted. I went upstairs and got ready for school.

When I walked back into my room Takara was in there. "Hi-chan, when you get home after school will you tell me about it? I want to know what it's like" she said. I nodded and sat on my bed. "I'm excited but I'm nervous and scared. What if no one likes me Takara?" I asked sitting with my back to her. She brushed and braided my hair for me. "Hikaze, you'll be fine. It's okay to be scared and nervous" she said as I turned around. "I got an idea" I said. "Nani?" she asked. "Ask daddy Kurama if you, him and mama could pick me up after school. I'm going to prove to Hoseki I can do it!" I said standing up. She smiled. "You got your tear gem?" she asked. I nodded and showed her. "Good luck Hi-chan" she said kissing my cheek. "Is daddy giving you a ride?" she asked. "Hai!" I said walking out of my room and downstairs. "Good timing Hi-chan, I was just about to call you down" daddy Kurama said handing me my bag as I put my shoes on.

"Before I forget, your mama told me last night..if you get too scared and you feel like you cannot do it, call us and we'll come and get you" he said. "No way, I'm not giving Hoseki that satisfaction daddy" I said slinging my coat over my arm. "I'll let her know you said that" he said grabbing his keys and putting his shoes on. "Bye Hi-chan! See you after school!" Takara said. I nodded and walked out to wait. "Takara, schoolwork now" daddy Kurama said. "Hai!" she said going upstairs to get her stuff. We got in the car and got settled in and ready to leave. I looked around and pouted. "He must have forgotten...." I said sadly. "He didn't forget Hi-chan. I think he went to do something. He'll be home when you get home from school" daddy Kurama told me as he started the car and backed out of the drive and heading towards the school. When we pulled up to the school I suddenly got nervous. "Hikaze, you'll be fine. Calm down and breathe" he said. I nodded and grabbed my stuff. "Will you tell mama I love her and I'll see her after school" I asked him. "I will" he said. I opened the door and got out of the car. I took a deep breathe and looked around. "Alright Hi-chan, dont' let your demon side show" I thought to myself. I walked up to the front door and walked in. I stopped at the office and introduced myself "Oh yes. Minamino, Hikaze" the lady said. She looked to the right to call another student about my age over. "William, will you show Hikaze to his classroom please?" "Yes, Mrs. Summersin" he said with a different accent which intrguied me. He first walked me to my locker than my classroom.

"Excuse me, but where are you from?" I asked polietly. "Why do you want to know? Are you going to ask me to leave your country?" he asked rudely. "N-no, I didn't say that" I said. "Then what?" he continued. "I like your accent is all and I haven't heard one like it before" I explained. "Oh, sorry. I'm from London, England" he said. "What's England like?" I asked as he walked me to my class. "I'll tell you at lunch ok?" he asked. I nodded and took a deep breathe. "Hikaze, you'll be fine" he told me. "I hope so" I said stepping into the classroom. Everyone looked up. "Are you Hikaze Minamino?" the teacher asked. "H-hai" I stuttered. "Welcome to the fourth grade" she said. "Arigatou" I said. "My name is Ms. Tendo and I'll be your teacher for the year" she said smiling. I smiled back. "Go sit next to Alyssa" she said. "Hai" I said and went to sit down next to her. She smiled at me and I smiled back. We went through the morning learning all sorts of different things then what I was learning at home...Takara is going to be jealous of me...oh well. The teacher released us for lunch and I sat down in the back of the classroom and ate my lunch. " 'Ello Hikaze" I heard someone say. "Ohayo William, please sit down" I said. He sat down as we ate and talked about many different things. When lunch was over he went back to the office and I continued my first day at school know I had just made Hoseki eat his words.

[ReiRei]

After school that day mama, Takara and daddy Kurama came to get me. William walked me out. "I see your family came for you Hikaze. See you Monday then?" he asked. "Hai! Before we leave William, I would like you to meet my family. This is my mother Mrs. Suuichi Minamino, my sister Takara and my father Suuichi Minamino. William you have to promise never to tell anyone about my sister...please, it's very important to us" I begged him. "I promise I won't tell and it's very nice to meet all of you" he said bowing to them. We all talked for a moment and the got into the van. "Would you like a ride home William?" daddy Kurama asked. "No, thank you. My mum will be here soon" he said. Daddy nodded and drove away. "So...tell us!" Takara said. "You have to wait Takara, I want everyone else to hear" I said. "Aww...well did you have fun?" she asked. "Hai!" I said as we pulled up into the driveway. I saw daddy and Tenshi talking outside and I climbed out of the van. "Welcome home Hi-chan" Tenshi said. "Thanks. Where's Hoseki?" I asked. "I'm right here" he said. "I guess I was wrong and I'm sorry for being wrong" I smirked at him. "I had a great day. I kinda offended William but at lunch we talked and got to know each other. He's really nice. My teacher is nice to and she sat me next to a girl" I told them. Mama and Takara giggled. "Is she pretty?" Tenshi asked me. "I didn't really pay attention" I said. "Liar" Hoseki said. "Hoseki, he's telling the truth" daddy Kurama said. Hoseki growled. "That's so unfair!" he said. "I don't lie to get what I want Hoseki! I know you've hated me since day one! I don't know why you are so mean to me" I said as I turned to run inside. Takara glared at him. "Nice one Hoseki" she said and ran after me. "Hi-chan!" I heard mama yell after me. I ran into my room and laid down on the bed and cried. "Hi-chan, it's alright...Hoseki's jealous. I believe you even if he doesn't" Takara said. "Takara, please let me be alone right now. Thank-you for believing me" I said buring my face in my pillows. "Sure, I'll always listen if you need me too" she said as she stood up. I nodded and continued to cry.

A little while later I went downstairs to grab my bag. When I got down there I saw Hoseki going through my bag. "What are you doing Hoseki? I know I don't go through your stuff why are you going through mine?" I asked a little hurt. "This will get you in so much trouble. And I want to be right. You made me look like a fool Hi-chan" he said. "You did that on your own" daddy said coming up behind him. "Daddy Hiei! You scared me" he said. "Good. What's in your hand?" he asked. "A note from Hi-chan's teacher" he smirked hoping to get me in trouble. Daddy took it from him and read it:

"Dear Mr. and Mrs. Minamino;
I am pleased to report Hikaze has survived his first day of school. He is such a delight to have in class and very smart! You must be proud of him. Thank you so much for allowing him to be apart of my class!!!

Sincerely,

Tomoe Summersin"


"That was a very positive letter Hi-chan" Tenshi said coming up behind daddy. I smiled. "I like school, it's fun" I told him. "I'm proud of you Hi-chan" mama said. "Thank you mama" I said happily. "One way or another you'll screw up! When you do I'll be ready to rub it in" Hoseki said as he walked away. I ran and tackled him and starting hitting him. "Hi-chan!" mama said sharply. I ignored her and continued to beat up Hoseki. "HIKAZE RYUKO MINAMINO!" daddy Kurama said commanding my attention. I stopped and looked up at him. Mama stood there in shock. I stood up and went and stood in front of of them. "Gomen nasai...I'm tired of being harrassed and put down by Hoseki" I said. "That is not excuse to hit Hi-chan!" mama said. Hoseki sat up and started at me. "I can't believe you hit me" he said. I growled at him and came up behind him ready to knee him in the back of the head. "HI-CHAN!!!" mama yelled. Hoseki moved quickly behind daddy Kurama. "Upstairs now! You're grounded until further notice!" daddy Kurama said. "Yes sir" I said as I ran upstairs and sat on my bed to await their punishment.

(I don't know what chapter this is so please forgive me, it's been quite a while since I wrote this, I lost the first half of the pages and I'm not quite sure where they ran off too)