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Feral
11-09-2004, 02:41 PM
Dictating the truth, the love, for you,
I think you should of realised what to do.
I walk a lonely road, don't know where to go,
But its up to you, Rena, if you should follow.

I wonder if sometimes they should find me,
Beneath the darkened willow tree.
Check my vital signs, to see if its still there,
To check my eyes, too see if I care.

I walk through the bevelled dreams,
I know your confused, its just how it seems.
I don't know if I should help anyone,
Slit my throat, and be gone…..

But after all, is it best for the easy way out,
But I cant help the way I feel, or felt.
I don't believe that anybody feels the way I do,
About you? Not a clue….

There are many things I’d like to say to you,
And I swear, my love for you, is true.
I’d walk to you on broken glass,
Just to vouch with you again, and not pass.

Rena, I love you, but im confused,
My hearts all battered and bruised.
Loving two friends, a ripped character,
Still waiting for the response to occur.

Rena Rose
11-09-2004, 02:47 PM
*insane blush* it's good Lain... get my email and add me so we can talk about this

KyoKo
11-09-2004, 02:54 PM
wow...
if only kid knew

Erk Mizuhara
11-09-2004, 02:55 PM
she will when she reads this.

very good poem, Lain. like the rest of them.

Kawaii Shuichi
11-09-2004, 08:30 PM
It's very good. Put together very well.

Umm...yeah, keep up the good work.

ReiRei
11-09-2004, 09:37 PM
very well written Lain...I told you you had a knack for this stuff

White Mage
11-09-2004, 11:26 PM
I loved it!

Very well put MOC!

(MOC stands for Master Of Computers)

If you didn't have a nickname before, you do know!
If you already had one, oh well! You just got another one!

Feral
11-11-2004, 06:00 PM
I loved it!

Very well put MOC!

(MOC stands for Master Of Computers)

If you didn't have a nickname before, you do know!
If you already had one, oh well! You just got another one!
Haha thanks for the compliment, and thanks for the nickname. I guess im a master of computers because im an IE op or something? Either way, i like the nickname, and i like your compliments. Thankyou.

--Lain--

White Mage
11-13-2004, 11:16 PM
Thank you MOC!!!

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-14-2004, 12:35 AM
Guess i don't have to be yr msger bridge anymore^^;

Gd luck man.

Feral
11-14-2004, 10:19 AM
Guess i don't have to be yr msger bridge anymore^^;

Gd luck man.

Hehe, no, not anymore. I guess i built up the wimpered courage i had stored all before.....

That gives me an idea for another poem.... >.>

--Lain--

MajinYajuu
11-14-2004, 12:04 PM
Nice work...You really got inside & draged what you need to out with is one I see

Feral
11-14-2004, 12:45 PM
Nice work...You really got inside & draged what you need to out with is one I see

A good compliment there, i see.

100 Thankyou's.

--Lain--

MajinYajuu
11-14-2004, 01:42 PM
Seeing so much good stuff in here lately makes me want to start writing again, if only I had some inspiration again :swe:

Feral
11-16-2004, 02:32 PM
Seeing so much good stuff in here lately makes me want to start writing again, if only I had some inspiration again :swe:

I could be your inspiration ;)

--Lain--