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Sei Akujin
11-09-2004, 04:17 AM
This is a poem I came up with at work..........I wrote it on a piece of cloth...............

To Someone I Love

I long for you.
I want to hold you tightly.
Smell your perfume.
Fufill your fantasies.
I burn with the passion I have
For you.
It burns so hot.
If I can't hold you soon, I will
Be consumed by the fire.

Feeling the softness of your touch
Will subdue the blaze.
I will hold you dear.
Closer to my heart than anything.
I will not run from you. Never.
Instead, I will comfort and love you,
Even in tough times.

I will take your burdens and make
Them my own.
Don't cry alone, you have me to cry with.

I love you, always.

Erk Mizuhara
11-09-2004, 09:09 AM
wow...pretty good. (um...that's all i can think to say about it. Sorry)

Sei Akujin
11-09-2004, 09:19 AM
:swe2: It is dedicated to someone I love............

Kawaii Shuichi
11-09-2004, 08:26 PM
It indeed is well put together.

Goodjob.

ReiRei
11-09-2004, 09:40 PM
very good! very heartfelt and very sweet ^_^ I'm sure they will love it.

Sei Akujin
11-10-2004, 02:57 AM
I hope she see this soon............

Soi Fon
11-10-2004, 03:30 AM
*Is speechless*

Oh..........I love you too, He!

*puts arms around him*

Sei Akujin
11-10-2004, 04:21 AM
I am glad you like it!^^

*embraces her*

MajinYajuu
11-11-2004, 12:15 PM
Nice work dude, makes a change from all the dark ones you ususally do

neeru haku
11-18-2004, 01:12 AM
that was really really good

.com person
11-25-2004, 05:50 AM
; ^_^ Really Really Really neat....

Rhoey
11-25-2004, 02:08 PM
Wonderful.

Maybe you should make a wallpaper with something that she likes on it, and add that poem to it? Or a picture of you two on it...

Then you could give it to her that way :D
As a simple little gift. ^^

Sei Akujin
11-26-2004, 01:01 AM
Sounds like a great idea ^_^ Thanks Aroah for the suggestion....