PDA

View Full Version : Love


Kawaii Shuichi
11-08-2004, 06:21 PM
Love is wonders.
People blame it
When they are hurt.
But it's not the love
That hurts them so,
But it's the person
That they so deeply love.
Tearing them apart
But they don't want to blame
The one they love
So blames love in general
Growing cold.
Hatred inside
Towards the wrong foe.

I was in love
And she tore me apart.
I blamed my heart
but I know better now.
Because a new love came.
Something so unexpected.
It brought me back to life.

I am happy
Being in love.
And I will never regret
My feelings of the past
Because it's not love
That hurts you so.
But the person
That holds your heart.
And she that hurt me
No longer does.
Tonia has my heart
And I am happy
With that plan.

Kid
11-08-2004, 06:34 PM
wow i love it

ReiRei
11-08-2004, 07:16 PM
*tries not to cry* I think I'm going to cry....I-I don't know what to say but thank you....*breaks down and cries*

Tohru*
11-15-2004, 11:08 PM
o.k. Wonderful poem

White Mage
11-16-2004, 06:32 PM
Everyone is right!

This poem is wonderfully put!

It is right when you think about it...

Terrific job!

TonyTonyChopper
11-18-2004, 10:02 PM
Awesome poem!

Kawaii Shuichi
11-18-2004, 10:15 PM
Thanks everybody...Honestly I don't think it is that good myself, but then again I'm my own worst critic I suppose.... *shrugs*