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Erk Mizuhara
11-08-2004, 04:34 PM
The End

In the end,
It’s all we have.
This loneliness,
In the black.
We have only ourselves,
The only one we know is true.
But do we even know ourselves?
I don’t know myself.
I lost him long ago.

I lost her, too.
The one girl I felt was mine.
I thought I loved her,
For sure, I did.
And she loved me in kind.
But she left me,
But not for another man.
She chose afterlife instead,
To stand by God’s side,
And watch the world.

So, in the end, it’s all we have,
Or at least, it’s true for me.
Just this loneliness,
The shadow in our hearts,
But that will come to pass…
In the End.

Kawaii Shuichi
11-08-2004, 04:51 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A little close to home there buddy......

Very beautiful

*hands you a rose*

Erk Mizuhara
11-08-2004, 04:52 PM
*takes the rose, but gets pricked by a thorn, and drops it* ow! dammit. *picks up the rose* thank you, Kawaii. *hug*

jeff
11-09-2004, 02:26 PM
^^ I liked that one erk!!!!

Rena Rose
11-09-2004, 02:28 PM
very nice Erk

jeff
11-09-2004, 02:29 PM
The poem...Has that impact all the way through it and *wham* the punchline hits ya...It's rad!

Erk Mizuhara
11-09-2004, 02:29 PM
hee! thankies!! :oops:

Zelda
11-11-2004, 01:57 PM
It's wonderful.^_^ I wish I could write poetry...:p You did an wonderful job.^_^

Erk Mizuhara
11-11-2004, 02:47 PM
thanks, Zelda. :oops: :oops:

ReiRei
11-11-2004, 06:15 PM
again very nice and very good, you do have a talent for writing...my only talent is writing fanfics...I suck at poetry.

Erk Mizuhara
11-12-2004, 09:13 AM
...i write fanfics sometimes, too. But i usually get four pages in and run out of ideas...