No One

[Kid]

I stand there as the frost comes
it gets thicker and thicker
slowly it incases me in a shell of coldness
teaching me to hate and despise

I walk around not letting any one get close to me
staying frozen to the world
not wanting to be opened

'why does every one fear death and loneliness?
If your alone there is no one to hurt or hurt you
no one to be sad after your gone
no one to try and keep your memory alive
no one...'

[Erk Mizuhara]

wow...that is so much like my life.

[Kid]

lol
this poem tells my whole life nothin but pain...
im not much of a poem writer but i think thats
one turned out well

[Erk Mizuhara]

it did. i really liked it.

[Kawaii Shuichi]

Where you reading my mind?

Anyways, this is a very good poem. I like it.

*Hands you a rose*

[Erk Mizuhara]

i wish i could write that well.

[Traumer]

Interesting poem. Good though

[Kid]

erk my poem is not good you poem it was better

but thank you every one for saying it is

[Erk Mizuhara]

...my poetry is rubbish.

(that's my opinion.)

[ReiRei]

this is a very well written poem, it's ver good

[Erk Mizuhara]

bweh...no-one read mine poem...

[Kid]

Erk stop saying that your poem was good
im even going to print it out

[Erk Mizuhara]

... yeah, right.

[KyoKo]

erk she really did

[Erk Mizuhara]

...whatever. I'm not bothered if she did or didn't. At least, could we post this in my poem thread? It makes Kid's look insanely popular.

(sorry, that sounds selfish, doesn't it?)