The Choice

[Erk Mizuhara]

The Choice

I ask myself, all the time
If she even knows of me?
Has she once looked my way,
I do not know, I think she did.
But did she look me in the eye?
See behind the face of mine.
She always seems so nice.
But not only to me.
There are others, I know for sure.
But which one will she go for?

I know the others, only too well.
I would kill them all, it’s true.
But that would hurt that girl ever more.
I could not bear to do so.
Although it wouldn’t be the first time,
And it will not be the last.
Leave her for someone else?
Or get rid of the rest?
Either way, I’ll hurt her,
And she’ll choose someone else.

[Mac]

...... wow.....

that is really good....

[Feral]

Woa. Very good poem. I thought you had it in you. ^_-

I think you should call it 'The choice'.

--Lain--

[Erk Mizuhara]

yeah, i think the hardest part for me, in any writing, is the title.

(sorry about the edit, i think i missed that bit when i copied it)

[Kawaii Shuichi]

i thought you said you weren't good at writing poetry?

*cocks an eyebrow*

you lied. you are very good.

[Erk Mizuhara]

...i think it's crap. I have no confidence in my own abilities, i have been told many times.

[Kid]

wow i love it
*Claps*
keep it up

[Erk Mizuhara]

...thanks. :oops:

[Zelda]

...i think it's crap. I have no confidence in my own abilities, i have been told many times.

Well that's thier own opinion. Have confidence, take pride in your work! I think it's wonderful. I like this one better than the other.^_^ It's very good, they both are (this and The End).

[Erk Mizuhara]

wow...thanks Zelda! :oops: if you want more, then tell me and i'll see what i can do.

[ReiRei]

very good. I agree with Kawaii, you do have a talent for this ^_^ Keep up the good work