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Leila
11-10-2007, 04:45 AM
Name: Leila Moonflow
Age: 17
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Class: Assasin/Ninja
Alignment: Neutral ++
Appearance: black eyes, black hair, slender body, medium height(about 1,65 meters), low weight(about 40 kg).
Weapons:
ranged - Longbow
melee - Katana
Armor: light
Perks and drawbacks(the first one is the perk and the second one is the drawback):
1. Speech master: She has a way with words. Definitely the one who "talks" the way out of things.(persuade and bluff bonus)
No threat: The way she speaks and the way she looks don't make her a serious threat and she is never taken seriously.(a horrible penalty to intimidate)
2. Beautiful: Just like the name of the perk says: she's hot(persuade, bluff bonus, great chances of starting trouble over this)
Low strength: Well...you get it....she will never do any real damage in close combat.
3. Swift: High agility and acrobatic skills.
Nimble: She's not very tough. Actually it would be recommended to avoid any forms of damage.
4. Knows her enemy: She can find all sort of information about enemies such as elemental weaknesses, immunities, special abilities.
Awful merchant: She'd better not go shopping or she will buy things at almost twice the price.
Racial Traits:
- not trustworthy- she has encountered many friends who have betrayed her in the past, which makes her harder to earn her trust
Background: Scout and pathfinder by excellence, Leila loves her work(class). She always wanted to find something to do that would help the others and be in contact with nature. But the fact that she is a female didn't help her much out there: distrust, mockery, violence and pain are the things she encountered. She was born into a noble family but was banished from her home when she was very young. And now she searches for a way to gain her way back into the family by going on various missions and searching for ways to meet her parents again after so long.
And a picture:
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y30/Ay ... e_girl.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y30/Ayatai/1127512740_anime_girl.jpg)
Dark Shadow
11-10-2007, 04:51 AM
nice description... and good pic... althought... given the background, you'd have to create a new world to role play with her...
unless of course you 'change' her background a bit and adapt it to some world already there... changing the names would be fine though and if need be I could suggest some worlds to Role play.
Leila
11-10-2007, 04:56 AM
Yeah! that'd be great if you could!
Dark Shadow
11-10-2007, 05:04 AM
ok.
By reading some descriptions posted in the world threads, I'd suggest either Fantasy by Green Angel, althought you have to pm her to ask for permission, nothing difficult nor bad, she needs to look at your char. I also took in consideration which threads there are pretty much alive. I am currently role playing at Fantasy by Green Angel. Two chars, Xin and Dyne.
that would need only you to read the first post for a better understanding and change the names of the places if need be, she'd be willing to say so if needed.
http://www.animechatforums.com/forum/vi ... 43&start=0 (http://www.animechatforums.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=5143&start=0)
another world that perhaps would fit your char, but, you would need a really big change into the background and name of places or even her weapons, would be Gravitavia: the rebellion by jeff.
http://www.animechatforums.com/forum/vi ... 12&start=0 (http://www.animechatforums.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=8212&start=0)
Leila
11-12-2007, 07:34 PM
kk, i edited my backround *actually i deleted most of it ....* and i added some pictures, can i have an opinion on how it is now?
Dark Shadow
11-12-2007, 07:37 PM
Seems good to me. You would fit on every world except again Gravitavia... as Gravitavia is more like normal persons, no vieras... Fantasy is more open to fantasy creatures... you can join, just let Green Angel know. It's not particularly difficult nor anything.
Leila
11-12-2007, 09:36 PM
k, i'll change her to a human :P
Edit: i finished editing her now, could you take a look at it and see?
Dark Shadow
11-12-2007, 10:54 PM
yup. You can pretty much join any of the two world threads I posted before. No problems, just let the starter of the thread know that you want to join.
by the way, I did not meant that you would be unable to join in in Fantasy by green angel nor anything like that, you could as a viera, but Gravitavia is a bit different.
Leila
11-13-2007, 02:51 PM
:P ok, i'm thinking of making more characters.... but i just dont know wat to put in their character bio..., lol :lol:
Dark Shadow
11-13-2007, 02:55 PM
you could read the rules of some worlds, they can give you advice on creating a char, you can also look at other chars to give you ideas of what to include.
Mine for example, it's a long one, but, I think it has every detail it should have, you can just then adapt your chars to certain worlds
-x-Green-Angel-x-
11-14-2007, 10:44 PM
:evil: DYNE!!! What are you doing, telling her it's easy to get in?! AGH... :sta:
See, now I need to do something to make it super hard... Grrrrrr...
:idea: I know! *evil laugh*
On a more serious note.........................................
I like your charcter. She seems realistic. A little vague in some areas, but it adds a nice air of mystery about her.
Well it makes more sense than the post I made about Kiyo; up until I accidentally deleted it, and my olw Fenrorak character. x.x
I like it. o.o yes, it might be a little vague, and might lack some description but that just makes it easier to tailor the character to different types of role-play as you can just add or indeed delete any extra information that's specific for that one role-play.
Just don't get putt off because the site-admin rp's in Fantasy too. xD. I'm not gonna ban you for a bad post or anything. o.o
Rain_Pixie
11-15-2007, 11:52 PM
Since everyone else from ~*FANTASY*~ posted, I figured I'd haul my lazy butt over here. xD
I like your character and would love to see her in action. I hope to see you in that thread....if you pass Green Angel's test :twisted: LOL
-x-Green-Angel-x-
11-16-2007, 12:15 AM
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Leila
11-16-2007, 09:08 PM
could you tell me where i'm being vague? :P
Well in terms of vague, there isn't really that much detail with her history/background and also that regarding her weapons and the attacks / powers / abilities they're capable of.
Of course that means it's easily editable to fit different roleplays. O_o don't think we're forcing you to type stuff you don't like. x3
-x-Green-Angel-x-
11-18-2007, 05:44 AM
Pretty much what Mac-a-roo said. I'm not saying that your character is bad, she's actually pretty interesting.
She just seems... under developed, if that's the right word. Like if you look at Dyne's, his is so detailed you might go blind. Mine (which I will probably revise sooner or later) is not very lengthy, but detailed.
Basically, I think you need to add to your character's history (it's nice to know what she's doing even if she didn't tell the other characters why) and maybe some more details about her abilities (it's very helpful to know what you're up against).
But, repeating what I and everyone else said before, it's nice in such a way that you can easily adapt to certain RP's. (You don't need to do much adapting to mine; pretty much anything goes.)
By the way, I'm too lazy to make up some sort of test-thing, so...
:cheers: WELCOME TO *~*FANTASY*~*!!! :mrgreen:
Could you just be sure to read the rules and, not all, but some of the posts so that you're up to speed? That way Leila doesn't pop out of no where and be lost and confused.
So... Post as often as you can, and have fun! =]
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