Believe

[KyoKo]

I Made this poem one day when i was bored ... i got an award for it from poetry.com so i hope you like it 'cause they did ^_~

Believe

I try to believe but I can't.
My mind will not fully love you
Like my heart does. Why I don't know.
I look deep into my self to find the
The reason but I can't find it. I cry and
Cry, as I trying to find it.
You say it is because that I have
Never been loved by any one but my Mom and
Dad. Though that may be why I try to
Find another reason. I look through all the
Memories I can. Finding that I've been hurt by
People in my childhood, I cry as I lay on
My bed. Thinking to myself, as I cry.
Maybe I will get over this, if I don't I will
Be by my self for ever. Then I stop crying.
I here your words in my head, I will love you
No matter what you don't have to worry
About being alone. A smile comes to my face
As I fall in to a piece full sleep.

[kenshin25]

hmmm....interesting. There hasn't been many poems in this style. I mean the type of poems I write needs interpretation in order to understand or to see what it means. Mine are as deep as I want them to be but I like them. Mine don't rhyme, either. This type of poem is like directly what you feel. You don't need to think what the author is feeling, because your expressing it all. It's interesting to me, this type of style.

Still wondering......

[MajinYajuu]

It's great...I think that sums it up