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Feral
11-06-2004, 03:07 PM
Inside, you drive me crazy,
Watching everything die.
Some day's I just stare out,
Watching you cry…..

There is nothing to live for,
I always break down, now your vanished.
Why did all this just happen,
Hitting me back, your refurbished.

Burning up like fire,
Living my life that I’ve wasted.
But it really doesn’t compare,
To the tears that I’ve tasted.


I always feel like I’m leant on,
But in one word.
There’s nothing to live for...
Bye, Entrapment has accured.

I roast up in gallons of sweat,
I watch the world pass much more,
For I will always miss that girl..
That I adore.

I have my friend there for me,
I watch her lips, speaking to me.
Kawaii, the names the answer,
I should run and be free.

If I could keep on with her,
Being nice in tons….
Everyone now knows,
I cant live up to these expectations…..

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-06-2004, 03:20 PM
Subarashii...
*Dreams of the feeling inside...*

Kawaii Shuichi
11-06-2004, 03:25 PM
it's very good lain.
remember i'll be here if you ever need to talk.

Feral
11-06-2004, 03:49 PM
it's very good lain.
remember i'll be here if you ever need to talk.

Thankyou, again.

--Lain--

ReiRei
11-06-2004, 05:26 PM
again another well written poem. You are very heartfelt about the way you write. And that's not meant to sound cheesy but sorry if it does.

Kawaii Shuichi
11-06-2004, 05:28 PM
Lain- It's really no problem. Your poem is beautiful.

Hiei- I think my whole 'thinks every time i say something about my feelings is cheesy' problem is wearing off on you.....