An empty shell

[MajinYajuu]

The day you went out of my life
I died inside
No longer able to feel anymore
I have become but a shell

You would light up my days
Even when the sun didn't shine
Now I live in the darkness
On a bright summers day

I would give the world to you
Just to remove this pain
To fill this void
I would go to hell and back

So now I wait, I sit alone
For they have now departed
An empty shell I'll remain
Till we a united

[Hiryuu Megami23]

Sort of haunting.....nice!

[Aura]

I like it. It's interesting.

[MajinYajuu]

hehehe....this is sort of my attempt at something 'romantic'...I was asked to try for one, found it hard, so I made it a personal challange(all that know me know I love a good challange)...

I know it sort of turned out kinda dark in the end... but it is more about a love lost or stollen away.

[Sei Akujin]

Cool......................I need to be inspired again............................but how?