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Kawaii Shuichi
11-06-2004, 03:06 PM
Lies from the beginning on both our parts.
Both were forgiven but yours couldn’t end.
You never told me until it was too late
Of another love that I thought was cherished and true.
It hurt deep inside as I sat alone and cried.
A friend soon came helping through this
Dedicated to the end. No matter
How much I would put her through
After hours and hours then days after days
Being tortured by my thoughts and feelings
I knew what I had to do.
I had to end it now before it tore me apart
I didn’t want to as I cried like never before
But what hurt more is when I told you
And you didn’t care at all.
Once again my friend was there
Helping me pick up my shattered pieces.
I swore that I wouldn’t love no more.
Not after that, throwing away what’s left of my heart.
Not knowing to me though, she didn’t let go
She held me in place
Away from the pain of a razor or from turning to ice
She mended me together
Even though it was only you on my mind.
But then I saw your seduction of men
Leading them on only for attention.
It burnt me with betrayal as I heard your lies.
I gave you up so you could be happy with him
But all I see now is pain coming his way
As with the others you are with.
Anger builds up roaring inside.
My friend holds me close, keeping me calm.
And now she holds my heart
As I realize how much she means to me
No longer blinded by you, you scream.
Losing control, you’ve lost me
Now you go around looking for attention
Playing the victim saying it’s my fault
But I don’t care, ignoring your spite.
Because no longer will I let you hurt me anymore.

Feral
11-06-2004, 03:09 PM
.....

Thats totally awsome and very, very touching, if there was a rating system, count me in as a 10.

--Lain--

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-06-2004, 03:23 PM
Oh Syuuichi ...EXCELLENT work!! A truely touching piece

Chi14
11-06-2004, 03:27 PM
...whoa..that was really nice and sad...write more!

Kawaii Shuichi
11-06-2004, 03:36 PM
I'm glad you like it and here is a response poem I wrote to it.

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ReiRei
11-06-2004, 05:08 PM
*almost cries* that was sooo good...funny how I know who it's about. very good Shuichi

Kayla
11-06-2004, 05:53 PM
it was wonderful, beautiful, and touching all at once

Caveat Lector
11-07-2004, 08:11 PM
It was good..

No one
11-07-2004, 08:20 PM
Beautiful, as do I, know who its about.