Rendezvous

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

I know a place to get together.
A rendezvous where people all gather.
A place where lovers hold hands,
And others watch upon them.

I sit at the corner and watch,
The people come united,
But for me
I rather not.
Its just too frightening for thought.

I'm not a people person,
and the last thing i think of is,
communication.

I walk the lonely streets at night.
Alone,
Ashamed of what i am.
A failure in life.

But i'm happy when i can help people get together.
To find love with each other.
To form a family of their own,
while i watch on.
From a far.

I sink back into the shadows of the night.
Thinking back of what i've done.
Maybe it was a right move,
and,
That would make me contented.
Maybe,
For now...

[Kawaii Shuichi]

*starts crying*

OMG! Hiro kun!
That is so beautiful! Sad, but beautiful!

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

^^;
Well expressing how i feel right now can really help write poems....
I find that amazing myself

[Erk Mizuhara]

a well-written and well done poem, but unfortunately not my style.

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

a well-written and well done poem, but unfortunately not my style.

i would quote what Lain just said to me as my own now...

"is that sacarsm!!"

My opinion: Do you have a grudge on me or something>??

[Erk Mizuhara]

...eh? I said that it was a well done poem, and i mean it. It's just not the sort of poem that personally enjoy.

god, can't you accept praise?!

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

...eh? I said that it was a well done poem, and i mean it. It's just not the sort of poem that personally enjoy.

god, can't you accept praise?!

Well, if that was a praise, I would certainly reply a word of thanks.
What is this poem different from the others??

[Erk Mizuhara]

...look, it is a very good poem. This style of writing and poem isn't to my taste, but i still think it's good.

*sighs* **** you. you can't accept no praise. *flicks him off, and walks away*

[Erk Mizuhara]

No, I'm sorry. I just can't stand it when people have a go at me even when i try to praise them It really narks me off. This is the last time i try to praise someone's poetry.

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

I think you shouldn't stop praising other people's poetry.
Just try rephrasing your words of praise.

[Erk Mizuhara]

i express my opinions. that's what counts. You should be pleased. You wrote a poem of genre i generally don't like, and it impressed me.

some people are so tight...

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

Well, i've said my word of thanks before.
And i am pleased you said what came from your heart.

[ReiRei]

Hiro that was so good! I really enjoy reading what you write. Again thank you for your help on mine ^_^

[Rena Rose]

it's very nice onnichan

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

Hiro that was so good! I really enjoy reading what you write. Again thank you for your help on mine ^_^

Thx for the sweet comment. If you need anything edited, i'll be able to help you. Anytime. just PM me^^

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

it's very nice onnichan

Thx imotou-chan
Yours are very nice too.
Very touching.

loves fr yr aniki
Hiro