Neko VI

[BrokenWings_Sene]

The wasn't just one, there were three.
And I had thought one was bad enough.
The man I knew stood with another man and a women,
their face the same,
their eyes different,
their hair different.
As I got closer I could tell that they where hiding something.

Slender,
Childish,
Eyes an odd color,
Brown hair with red streaks.
Her voice rung in my head.
"Lets grow up together"
she had said to me once.

My heart stopped when I realised,
that there she was,
She was save,
She was save.

I called his name and he turned around,
He gave him that smile of his,
The others looked over

One thing was said,
then another,
then again,
then once more

I called her name and she answered.

She was save,
She was save,
She was mine once again.



I called his name,
And he called mine,
Together again.
Together again.

"Forever we will stay, together"
He said, as he embraced me.

Together,
Together,
Together,
Once again.

[Reve Noir]

for a moment, i thought it was a tragic end, considering the words of the first stanza and the color of red...

phew.. i am glad it isn't.. xD because if it was, i think i would've cried..

"Forever we will stay, together", hmm?

one of the few poems i've read that has captured my heart, as well as my soul..

hope to read more of your works, ms. Sene ^_^

[-x-Green-Angel-x-]

I love how you gave an insight of the narrator's once lost love. It truly brought it together.

I applaud your talent, Sene. It is truly magificent!