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jaguarjaz
11-05-2004, 07:29 PM
Why don't you care,
That life past you by,
You know it isn't fair,
That you never want to cry

You hold everything in,
When you know we're around,
Your life is a spin,
Tumbling to the ground,

You act like a fool,
Leaving your friends behind,
Well you are not cool,
We're hard to lose but easy to find

We try to be nice,
Make things better for you,
You need our advice,
So I'm going to see you through

Well now this is the end,
Do you still think of me,
You still are my friend,
As good of friend as you'll ever be

So what did you think of this. I just wanted to know if you we're still with me, but this is not the end, so if you are confused, here is the answer:



Suicide doesn't help the pain,
It makes us go away,
People think you're insane,
Never listening to what we have to say

Do the right thing,
Like i know you would,
Give me a ring,
When you know you should

You got friends everywhere,
You especially got me,
All your secrets we'll share,
Life is one big fantasy


Well, this is just a poem I wrote about my friend.

Jou-chan
11-05-2004, 10:13 PM
that was really good...I better show that to my friend. We actually went to a councelor today 'cause she wanted to kill herself. I really like it though...

11-06-2004, 03:50 AM
Well, I'm glad you liked it and well I hope this poem helps. My friend, she stopped doing crazy stuff and now she is hanging out with me, well was. Now she is going to college and I'm going to e-mail this poem to her. I actually made another. I might post it up later.