Neko V

[BrokenWings_Sene]

He came again, with his mocking laugh.
This time he said that he had some news.

My love sweet love was home,
Even so I felt my heart shatter,
Drowned in a typhoon,
Never to be found.

I grabbed his hand,
And not caring I cried in his arms.
With Empathy he said to me,
"You'll see him again"
I cringed,
He felt me stiff and smiled at me.

"Trust me,"
He said as he disappeared,
like passing rain.

Trust.

Trust in someone,
Trust in him?

In the cold I could hear his whispers.
"I'll see you again"

the last lyrics he said to me.

Once again, I sang my song.
"You will always be inside my heart....
Will I have a place inside your heart too?"

Trust in him,

To see him once more,
I would trust what the humans call the devil

[Reve Noir]

absolutely love it. (sorry for the cliche-ish line; it is exactly how i felt after reading your words. xp)

especially the last line: "To see him once more, I would trust what the humans call the devil", *sigh* passion, or even 'zeal' for her love..

trust... a daunting phrase, no?

i hope the heroine's hope will not be shattered...

grand writing, ms. Sene ^_^

[-x-Green-Angel-x-]

*sigh* I agree completely with Reve.

I don't theink there's anything more to say except that I think this is the best poem-series that I've ever read.

Onto Neko VI!!!