Again.

[Feral]

My second poem, im not a pussy, but i cried while writing this.

I could spend my life, in this sweet moment,
I could stay awake, for you. Forever…
Smile while everyone stares at you…
I could always picture you, in deep treasure,
I don't want to miss you again,
I want you back, to hold you close.
Again.

I could still miss you, years on,
I know how you feel for me, keep it….
I want to pause time, when im kissing you,
But I don't want to miss you, for one second,
As I dream of you, every night.
I don't want to close my eyes, encase you disappear,
Again.

--Lain--

[Erk Mizuhara]

*cries* wow...i wish i could write like that... beautiful. truly beautiful. I would actually like to copy it and save it on my PC (with you permission, of course). *wipes away tears* seriously, Lain. It's brilliant.

[Sakuma Ryuuichi]

*stares...
WOW...
Well, i can see how you feel, man
I'll be there for and with you till the very end of this.
I'll help you through your obstacles.
....
damn i'm starting to write again

~Xav~

[Erk Mizuhara]

...i can't write poetry. I clam up after about two lines, if i even write two lines!!

[Feral]

*cries* wow...i wish i could write like that... beautiful. truly beautiful. I would actually like to copy it and save it on my PC (with you permission, of course). *wipes away tears* seriously, Lain. It's brilliant.

Thankyou, and you may copy and save it, if you wish.

--Lain--

[Erk Mizuhara]

wow...thanks a bunch! i really liked it!

[Kawaii Shuichi]

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*almost speechless as i read it again*

[Feral]

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*almost speechless as i read it again*

Thanks :oops:

Its not that great, its just how i feel.

--Lain--

[ReiRei]

Lain that was truly very good. you do have a wonderful knack for it. Keep it up, please ^_^

[Erk Mizuhara]

don't be so negative of your own skill, Lain.

[Kawaii Shuichi]

*finally able to say something*

MAN! That makes my stuff look like crap!

May I print off a copy to put in the front of my school binder?

[Feral]

*finally able to say something*

MAN! That makes my stuff look like crap!

May I print off a copy to put in the front of my school binder?

Hehe, yeah, if you really want to.

--Lain--

[Kawaii Shuichi]

Okay.

*PRINT!*

Mwahahahahahhaha! Thanks. It's really good.

[Feral]

Okay.

*PRINT!*

Mwahahahahahhaha! Thanks. It's really good.

Glad i could help :)

--Lain--

[Mac]

..... *cries* It reminded me of why i became depressed on Fridat night. . . . that's a really good poem... *edit, copy, paste*