"Rain of Tears" (Original Story about Elves ^_^)

[Erufu-chan]

This is my first Original Fiction, and I currently have 2 chapters finished.

Here is a link to the story: http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1698516

Please read it and post your comments, suggestions and opinions as reviews on that site, if you don't mind ^_^;

- Erufu-chan (Cute Elf)

[Motoko]

I loved it!! It was amazing!!! ^_You have great writer skills! I hope you get to write more. And if you want, private message (pm) me ok!? Thanks, and good luck! ^_^ ^_^