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Feral
11-05-2004, 06:46 PM
This is my first ever peice of poetry, so please dont laugh, i just put my real thoughts and emotions into this.

My heart is left to be desired,
No-one there for me now.
I wanted you to know,
That I always see the trust in your eyes.

I don't ever want you hurt,
Only for you to be protected.
The worst is now over,
For ever, so endless within.

I don't feel cared for,
No-one there for me still.
I love the way you smile.
I would kick out the bad, for you.

But you don't seem to understand,
For why in my mind, I hold you.
I don't care for your desire,
But for your heartless fancy.

The evil we share,
Is like the sin beyond thoughts,
I am fading,
Slowly…….

Help me to live,
Through the jealousy I keep,
I wanted you to have the only thing,

Me…..

Don’t fail us, please,
The worst is over now,
We can now be spaced out,
And learn our lessons of sacrifice.

--Lain--
Kawaii Shuichi
11-05-2004, 06:54 PM
*hugs lain*

hmmmm...... very good poem.

remember i'll always be here for you if you want to talk.

*kisses your forehead*

just never give up on love.
there will be others.
ReiRei
11-05-2004, 06:55 PM
wow Lain, that was really good and really heartfelt. You, Hiro, and Shuichi have this uncanny knack for writing. It's very good, keep it up
Feral
11-05-2004, 06:57 PM
*hugs lain*

hmmmm...... very good poem.

remember i'll always be here for you if you want to talk.

*kisses your forehead*

just never give up on love.
there will be others.

Thankyou. *hugs kawaii*

I have many others i will post later, but this will do for now.

wow Lain, that was really good and really heartfelt. You, Hiro, and Shuichi have this uncanny knack for writing. It's very good, keep it up

Thanks, i really dont see how...Im not even a writor, never have been any good at English.

--Lain--
Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-05-2004, 07:00 PM
I'm not laughing. its very good
*shakes Lain's hand*
ReiRei
11-05-2004, 07:01 PM
just please trust me...I know really very good poems and you are in my top 5 writers that I know...that should be an honour to you ^_^ j/k btw about the honour thing, but I'm serious about the top 5....
Erk Mizuhara
11-05-2004, 10:10 PM
a fantastic poem. i found it quite powerful and moving.
Feral
11-07-2004, 11:55 AM
a fantastic poem. i found it quite powerful and moving.

Thankyou, again....

--Lain--