Its okay, I'm use to it

[Jou-chan]

I only come on to write poetry now...I dont think anyone remembers me and thats okay...This Poem sucks but i was angry when i wrote it.

You ignore me
Pretend I dont have feelings
You act like I'm nothing
Its okay, I'm use to it

You dont need me
You have others now
Hell, you barely talk to me
Its okay, I'm use to it

You dont look at me
Its like I'm not there
You always blow me off
Its okay, I'm use to it

You lie to me
I know its true
You pretend like nothings changed
Its okay, I'm use to it

It hurts
Not to be needed
Like I dont have a life
Its not okay, but I'm use to it

[Reve Noir]

oh hello there, ms. Jou-chan.. a member from the oblivion i see.. welcome back ^^

my what a sad poem you've written, yet i really enjoyed it..

a poet's words should not be criticized.. especially this poem, since its so well composed..

neglection can be devestating to one's life..

hopefully, your future will have brighter seeds..

[frank]

Don't sell yourself short, Jou-chan. I think many members would remember you. Including me.
But if ACF at least serves as a place for you to present your poetry, that's fine. ^_^

You poem doesn't suck. It's how you felt at the time and it was what you needed to write. It's good, really. And doesn't beat us over head with an agonizing tale of despair and anger and futility and all the things that you managed to pack into a very short amount of space.

I like the twist at the very end, with the last line. That made your piece even more dramtic.

Present more of your works, please?

[-x-Green-Angel-x-]

Short and simple; straight to the point. Nicely done! :mrgreen:

Poetry is supposed to be about feelings, so ultimately, this is a true
work of art. You were angry, and you portayed that emotion to its fullest.