Call For Love

[Erk Mizuhara]

Deep within your eyes, I see your soul.
Drawn on your smile, I see your heart.
Shining through your face, I see your mind.
Upon your gentle touch, I feel your love.

Within your arms, my heart is free.
Upon your lips, my mind ablaze.
Beneath your gaze, my soul rejoice.
Holding you, my love dances.

Always be with me, fill my soul.
Never release me, warm my heart.
Eternally joyful, you are my mind.
Everlasting, our love sings.

Deep within your eyes, I see myself.
Drawn on your smile, I see our heart.
Shining through your face, I see your mind.
Upon your gentle touch, I feel our love.

[frank]

:|

[Reve Noir]

this piece made me smile as i read it through

i love the way how you've portrayed the person of your life

also, the 'explanations' of each of the aspects of your lover (lol 3 of's) was quite appealing

another great poem Enishi ^^

[Erk Mizuhara]

Notice how the very last line said 'our love', unlike the fourth line, which says 'your love'.

[frank]

:|

[Erk Mizuhara]

Thank you very much. I had hoped that it would be noticed and have the desired effect.

[Lady Vamp]

^^ I like it.

[-x-Green-Angel-x-]

:roll: Vamp...

Enishi, I absolutely adore you work. You are truly talented.

And here's a question for you: Have you ever considered writing songs?
You know, becoming a lyricist?

[Erk Mizuhara]

Answer: No.