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Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-04-2004, 10:34 PM
I wake up.
Lost in a foreign land.
Looking out the window,
Finding nothing,
but building blocks on each side.
No familiar faces.
No one to talk to.
Just everyday troubles,
To fill my day.

I missed your smiles and laughter,
I missed your lame jokes
But come to think again,
You have made me really happy over time.

I never thought this day would come,
For us to part.
But it seemed to me,
it had just did.

But then again,
Nothing could pull us apart.
By blood or luck.

The day we parted,
You didn't shed a tear,
You held it all back.
but i know,
there has already been a wound
deep inside your heart
You missed me so deeply
as i missed you to.

But now,
I am so far away from you.
Things are not the same anymore.
I don't see you anymore.
Don't see your smiles,
Can't hear your laughter.

I want to touch you.
Make you happy.
I know you're doing your best
to please me.
And I'm happy to know so.

But now,
I'm alone.
Too far from you.
your comfort,
Yet too near for entertainment.

I walk on the streets.
People just avoid me,
Have i been rejected?
Or is it just me.
Isolating myself from the world.
Is it so?

Maybe I'm just not opening myself to the world.
I'm not ready to face people.
Not yet.
Not now.
Then again,
what if i stayed in my cocoon of lone forever.
Would that make me a better man?

Kawaii Shuichi
11-04-2004, 10:39 PM
*Starts to cry and hugs big brother*

Daijoubu desu ka. Gomen ne.....

ReiRei
11-04-2004, 10:42 PM
wow Hiro that was really very good. you and Shuichi have a knack for writing beautiful poems. Very heartfelt.

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-04-2004, 11:01 PM
*Starts to cry and hugs big brother*

Daijoubu desu ka. Gomen ne.....

*hugs Syuuichi*
Don't cry.
*pats Syuuichi*
I'm ok for now.
Thanks for being here with me.

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-04-2004, 11:02 PM
wow Hiro that was really very good. you and Shuichi have a knack for writing beautiful poems. Very heartfelt.

Well, Thanks.

Come to think of it, i haven't been writing for a long long time.
I think Syuuichi has a better hand at poems. I'm getting rusty.

ReiRei
11-04-2004, 11:19 PM
nonsense! you are very skilled. ^_^

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-04-2004, 11:27 PM
nonsense! you are very skilled. ^_^

ha...I was better last time.

ReiRei
11-05-2004, 12:04 AM
I never read your other work but I really do like this one

Sakuma Ryuuichi
11-05-2004, 12:42 AM
I never read your other work but I really do like this one

Ha...i have no other work lying around. Well except the rp with Lain and Rena-chan

ReiRei
11-05-2004, 01:07 AM
*blinks* I guess that makes sense then ^_^ silly me