the Cathedral

[Reve Noir]

the celestial edifice
impends across the sky
the cosmic tower
elongates amid the ground

the flourishing garden
tenets many blooms
the nostalgic foutain
satisfies many birds

the harmonious organ
speaks sympathetically
the radiant candle
dances blissfully

the looming arch
guards vigilantly
the stained glass
illustrates inventively

the portaits of Seraphs
supports the weary
the Stations of the Cross
sorrows the caring

the Marian statue
embraces the miserable
the divine cruxifix
accepts the unworthy

the sacred alter
relieves the wretched
the Holy Cathedral
welcomes the lost

[mayonayz]

Hey there.
My first impression of your poem was… CAPITALS o.O but as I read I realized that I think the lack of capitals seem to suit the work, though capitals would make it look more sophisticated and neat. Your vocabulary is impressive! I had to look up a few words, just to make sure I got the correct meaning. [I did :)] I found a few spelling errors:

the nostalgic foutain
Should be:
the nostalgic fountain

the portaits of Seraphs
Should be:
the portraits of Seraphs

the divine cruxifix
Should be:
the divine crucifix

[frank]

This is a nice piece, Ladies' and gives a good attitude of the gentleness and harmony found by many within a church or on it's grounds.

It seems that we have another "spell checker" besides myself, and one with whom I can't disagree. ^^

Please show us more of your works.

[Reve Noir]

Ach! thank you, thank you, thank you, ms. nazy! wow i missed that much spelling o.0; ... better go back to my vocabulary lessons *sigh*

and thank you frank.. ^.^

[mayonayz]

Heh, you're very welcome. Even the best of spellers and grammar nuts mess up sometimes. My friends call me the spelling nazi, so when I make a mistake and don't correct in right away... you can imagine their reaction :)