wrong turn

[belial11737]

One of my firsts attempts at a poem.....

All I've built in a lifetime
I'll destroy in a day
Took a wrong turn on the highway
And now I'm faced with the end.
The fate of my destruction
Will be the joy of my rebirth.
That's all I now hope for
A new begining for this end.
The return to nothingness, the destruction of all
It is all inevitable because of a wrong turn..

[KyoKo]

*claps* wow nice i like very much you and
a very good poet
^Oni^

[Kawaii Shuichi]

again...you are very good. it is very touching and i give a 2 thumbs up. *hands you a rose*

[belial11737]

thank you very much to the both of you...
::takes rose:: thank you ::places it in a very special part of the hearth::

[ReiRei]

very good, you have a knack from what I read for poetry. ^_^ make sure you hang Shuichi's rose upside down to dry out and keep it.