Sick Little Suicide

[Mors]

You’ve hurt me so much
You cheated and lied to me
You took my heart
And you bleed it dry
How am I to move on
When you once were so kind to me
You once took me in your arms
And instantly my walls fell down
I told you everything
Would have given you everything
Even my honor
But you refused
And cheated and lied to me
You were my true love
And yet I love you still
If you were to come back
I would forgive all
And go back to the beginning
When you treated me so well
Treated me like your princess
God I would give anything for that again
I would give my soul to the Devil
To have you back
But of course that won’t happen
For I don’t believe in a Devil
But until your return
You are the reason
For my sick little suicide…

[Aura]

Sad but a good poem in it own way. Plz dont tell me you've thought of suicide.

[Mors]

every day of my life i think about suicide.....one failed attempt....sorry to tell u the truth

[kenshin25]

(don't worry about it Aura, she's always like that.) Do you gotta be so dramatic Mors, your not like that when you talk to me or, at school. heh heh j/k. This was a pretty cool poem. Keep it up Ms. Published Writer.

^_^'

[Aura]

Yeah thats ok I've thought about it too...as you can tell it failed.

[Takeshi]

i never think of suicide. my life sucks too. good poem bye the way.

[Tohru*]

I'm ok with life just not school only thing keeps me going is my anime

[Takeshi]

i hate school!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

[Mors]

lol kill everyone...lol

[BlackShadow]

go ahead and kill me i wouldn't care. anyways i have thought of suicide.

[Takeshi]

im not in favor of that blackshadow.

[BlackShadow]

thats all right you don't have to kill me

[Aura]

Yeah I actually dont mind school if it means getting away from My dad! Did you know that ani-depressants can cause suicidal thoughts! thats sad.

[Mors]

no wonder i'm always suicidal....i'm on three! lol

[Aura]

wow...yeah it was on the news

[MajinYajuu]

This is good.

[kenshin25]

Hey mors,
just letting you know I read it again as of 09/27/04, and I was inspired to write this remixed version of your poem. I give you all your credit to you. It's called "just a sick little suicide?". Thanx again, couldn't have written this without you.

[MercutioCrow]

i tried to hang myself, but i was afraid the extension cord would break.
i would die if i could tie a sturdy knot to hang me by.
as i said i would be dead if my noose weren't so loose about my head.
and i couldn't get the revolver open. and i couldn't find any .357s for the semiauto.
suicide is difficult.

[kenshin25]

your just kidding right?...right?

Heh heh...-_-'.
If we are not meant to be in this world, do we end it?
If our hearts belong to no one, do we make it stop beating?
If no one is there to hold us, will we take the warmth away from our bodies?
If no one remembers us, will we be a withered memory?

If no one will speak of your history, will it be lost?
If your dreams are not there to comfort you, will you dream of darkness?
If we don't make a mark in history, will we vanish?
If we die, will anyone notice.

"some people say that if you die on a subway train in Newyork city, no one will notice your dead..."

[Mors]

to answer all of ur questions from ur mini poem....yes. if no one really cares for u then wut the hell are u doing in this world. i have no one...no one to love no one to hold me no one....

[kenshin25]

That sucks...
I think that as long as you have people in your life, that actually care about you being around...than that's all gravy. I don't know...just my opinion.

mmm...grrraavvvyyyy....^_^