What I lost

[Jou-chan]

yeah...another poem


I lost something
Something from deep within
I dont know where to find it
I dont even know where to begin

For what I lost was an emotion
I just threw it away
I didn’t see its purpose
So why should it stay

This emotion causes happiness
But in the end causes pain
Sure you get a little joy
By that’s not much to gain

I’m lonely without this emotion
I shouldn’t have left it behind
I’m really starting to miss it
It not being here is weighing on my mind

I’ll never get it back
It’s an emotion from above
My heart is now wrecked
For this emotion...is love

[kenshin25]

When I was starting to read it I already knew it was about love. It was a nice poem, how bout a title?

You used very powerful words and sentences to express this thing called love.

"...Time Heals all Things..."
(well not necessarily)

[Jou-chan]

I really do need a better title. Time heals all things huh. Well its sure talking a while but as they say roman wasn't built in a day or at least that what my teachers tell me.

[kenshin25]

something happened in the past? Well that's a personal matter anyways. Never mind.

"...nothing is free in this world..."

not even time. yeah you say you got free samples at costco (if its not there, its a wholesale warehouse), but you need to "spend" time to get there in the first place.

[Jou-chan]

Lets put it this way I have one boyfriend my whole life and never went out with anybody since we broke up, i'm just that hated lol. You're right nothing is free in this world which in some ways is very depressing.

[kenshin25]

One of the hardest things to learn is to move on. What you think, regret, or just depressed of what happened that shouldn't have...You just need ot move on. Don't get me wrong I'm not saying it in a hostile way. It's just, I don't like seeing people(or feeling) affected like this. I always share a little bit of pain.

"...We have suffered all these years,
then jesus came, not just shared
but took all the pain from us,
and put the burden on himself..."
---I don't know , I just made it up (no I'm not jewish)

Past is the past, we must focus on the here on now. Or we'll be lost. I know it's easier said then done, but it's worth the effort, we can't sit and think all day, I can't believe this, or should I do this or that? We need to be humans, and live freely without chains of emotions that tie us down.

[MajinYajuu]

you have some real talent there Jou-chan

[Jou-chan]

Thank you...See when we broke up there wasn't really a reason besides my mom got all mad at me saying I was to young and crap like that. So yea..I'm over it now. He's an @$$

[Blades Of Nightmare]

that is soo wrong...after all it is your life you could do what ever you want